Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Candidato
Absolutely not, because the numbers all consist of 10 figures which are similar to each other.
Examinador
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Candidato
Definitely yes, because I want to become a doctor in the future. For example, I will need to work with nutrition data and medical statistics to diagnose patients accurately and provide effective treatment.
Examinador
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Candidato
Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I was good at it and found solving problems quite satisfying. For example, I consistently scored in the top ten in my class during maths exams, especially excelling in geometry.
Examinador
Which numbers are important to you?
Candidato
I think the number 7 is very significant to me because my birthday falls on the 7th of December. I also feel that 7 is a lucky number in many cultures, which makes it even more special.
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答较为简洁,但表达不够自然,且缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词连接句子,使回答更流畅。
Ejemplo: No, I'm not good at remembering numbers because they often consist of many similar digits, which makes it difficult for me to recall them accurately.
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Puntuación: 90.0Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,但可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富词汇表达。
Ejemplo: Definitely yes, because I want to become a doctor in the future. For instance, I will need to analyze nutrition data and medical statistics, which will help me diagnose patients accurately and provide effective treatments.
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Puntuación: 95.0Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富且具体,结构合理。可以适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I was good at it and found solving problems quite satisfying. For example, I consistently scored in the top ten in my class during math exams, especially excelling in geometry.
Which numbers are important to you?
Puntuación: 90.0Sugerencia: 回答具体且有个人色彩,但可以增加连接词使句子更连贯,同时尝试使用更多相关词汇。
Ejemplo: I think the number 7 is very significant to me because my birthday falls on the 7th of December. Moreover, 7 is considered a lucky number in many cultures, which makes it even more special to me.
× the numbers all consist of 10 figures which are similar to each other
✓ the numbers all consist of 10 digits which are similar to each other
“figures”在这里指数字的形状,但更常用的表达是“digits”表示数字的位数。虽然“figures”不是错误,但“digits”更准确。此处属于单复数用词选择问题。
× I consistently scored in the top ten in my class during maths exams
✓ I consistently scored in the top ten in my class during math exams
“maths”是英式英语,若使用美式英语应为“math”。根据上下文选择统一用法。此处属于单复数及词形问题。