Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Candidato
No, I'm not very good at, uh, remembering numbers. Uh, I often record it on the memo and that will widely forget it soon.
Examinador
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Candidato
In true work I will remember often because my major is chemical and we will have many base and the photo we use.
Examinador
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Candidato
As each child I would very like man's because I think mass is a good subject that can improve my imagination and I think when I would achieve the math say very easy to learn, but I would grow the high school I would love with the right man's certificate.
Examinador
Which numbers are important to you?
Candidato
Oh, I think maybe the phone number or my peering and friends, umm, it's very important for me that if I miss some dangerous or problems, I will call it, uh, and invite you to get the phone. I can use the other phone to see the number and connecting with them.
Are you good at remembering numbers?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“that will widely forget it soon”不符合英语表达习惯。建议你在回答时注意句子结构,避免重复使用“uh”,并且用更准确的词汇表达意思。
Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers. I usually write them down in my memo, but sometimes I still forget them quickly.
Will you use numbers in your future work?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 你的回答语法和词汇使用不准确,句子不完整且难以理解。建议你在回答时先明确主题句,然后用具体细节支持,注意专业词汇的正确使用。
Ejemplo: Yes, I will use numbers often in my future work because I major in chemistry, and we need to measure quantities and calculate formulas regularly.
Did you enjoy studying math as a child?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中有很多语法错误和词汇错误,表达不清晰。建议你简洁明了地表达观点,使用正确的时态和词汇,并且避免冗长复杂的句子。
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I thought it helped improve my imagination. I found it easier to learn when I was younger, and I liked getting good grades in math.
Which numbers are important to you?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达不够清晰,句子结构混乱,词汇使用不当。建议你先明确回答问题,然后用具体例子支持,注意句子连贯和逻辑性。
Ejemplo: The most important numbers to me are phone numbers of my family and friends. They are useful in emergencies or when I need to contact them quickly.
× No, I'm not very good at, uh, remembering numbers.
✓ No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers.
句中逗号使用不当,导致语句不连贯,应去掉逗号使句子更流畅。
× Uh, I often record it on the memo and that will widely forget it soon.
✓ Uh, I often record them on the memo and then will quickly forget them soon.
代词使用错误,numbers为复数,应使用复数代词them;'widely'用词不当,应为'quickly'表示快速忘记。
× In true work I will remember often because my major is chemical and we will have many base and the photo we use.
✓ In my future work, I will often remember numbers because my major is chemistry and we will have many bases and photos to use.
句子结构混乱,'true work'应为'future work','chemical'应为'chemistry','base'应为复数'bases',句子需调整顺序使其通顺。
× As each child I would very like man's because I think mass is a good subject that can improve my imagination and I think when I would achieve the math say very easy to learn, but I would grow the high school I would love with the right man's certificate.
✓ As a child, I really liked math because I think math is a good subject that can improve my imagination. I thought math was very easy to learn, but when I grew up in high school, I loved getting the right math certificate.
形容词和副词使用错误,'very like'应为'really liked','mass'应为'math',句子结构混乱,需调整语序和用词使句子通顺。
× Oh, I think maybe the phone number or my peering and friends, umm, it's very important for me that if I miss some dangerous or problems, I will call it, uh, and invite you to get the phone. I can use the other phone to see the number and connecting with them.
✓ Oh, I think maybe the phone numbers of my peers and friends are very important to me. If I encounter some danger or problems, I will call them. I can use another phone to see the numbers and connect with them.
代词使用错误,'peering'应为'peers','it's'应为复数'are'对应复数主语,句子结构混乱,需调整代词和句子使其通顺。