Number— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "the remembering the numbers" is incorrect; it should be "remembering numbers." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "when I was a child" and "still now" without clear linking. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar mistakes to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I'm confident that I am good at remembering numbers. For instance, when I was a child, I could recall almost all the uniform numbers of my favourite Japanese baseball team. Even now, I can remember over 80 numbers easily.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "numbers of cooperation" which is unclear. Try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating "after going back" twice; instead, use linking phrases to make your answer more fluent and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I will definitely use many numbers in my future work. Although I am currently studying at university, I plan to work as an economic journalist in Japan, so I will need to use statistics, profit figures, and company data regularly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "the formulas" should be "formulas," and "a very complicated discussions" should be "very complicated discussions." Also, try to use linking words like "however" or "instead" more effectively to connect your ideas. Aim for more natural sentence structures and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: No, to be honest, I didn't enjoy studying mathematics as a child because I disliked the process of calculations, using formulas, and finding only one correct answer. Instead, I preferred social studies and literature since they involve more complex discussions and arguments.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Phrases like "position number of shortstop invisible" are confusing. Try to clarify your ideas and use correct grammar, for example, "number six is important to me because it was my uniform number when I played shortstop." Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Number six is very important to me because it was my uniform number when I played as a shortstop in junior high school. I was a regular player in that position, so the number holds special memories for me.

× Yes, I'm confident that I'm good at the remembering the numbers.

✓ Yes, I'm confident that I'm good at remembering numbers.

The use of 'the' before 'remembering the numbers' is incorrect here because 'remembering numbers' is a general activity, not a specific set of numbers. The definite article 'the' should be omitted to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Still now I can remember over 80 numbers also.

✓ Even now, I can remember over 80 numbers as well.

The phrase 'Still now' is not idiomatic in English. 'Even now' is a better choice to express the idea of continuing ability. Also, 'also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end of the sentence for natural flow.

× Although I'm studying at the university right now, I have to work as an economic journalist after going back to Japan, so I have to use many statistics or profits or numbers of cooperation.

✓ Although I'm studying at university right now, I have to work as an economic journalist after going back to Japan, so I have to use many statistics, profits, or numbers of corporations.

The phrase 'studying at the university' is better as 'studying at university' when referring to university in general. Also, 'numbers of cooperation' is incorrect; it should be 'numbers of corporations' to refer to companies. Additionally, commas are needed to separate items in the list for clarity.

× Instead, I prefer the social studies and the literature because it requires a very complicated discussions and arguments.

✓ Instead, I preferred social studies and literature because they required very complicated discussions and arguments.

The question is about the past ('Did you enjoy studying math as a child?'), so the answer should be in the past tense. 'Prefer' should be 'preferred', and 'requires' should be 'required'. Also, 'social studies' and 'literature' are plural concepts here, so 'they' is used instead of 'it'. The article 'the' before 'social studies' and 'literature' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× Number six is the most important unforgettable numbers for me because it is, uh, position number of shortstop invisible.

✓ Number six is the most important unforgettable number for me because it is, uh, the position number of the shortstop.

'Numbers' should be singular 'number' because it refers to one specific number. Also, 'position number of shortstop invisible' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'the position number of the shortstop' to make sense. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'position number' and 'shortstop'.

× When I was in junior high school, I could get a regular position of a short stop and #6 was my uniform number.

✓ When I was in junior high school, I was able to get a regular position as a shortstop and #6 was my uniform number.

The phrase 'could get' is less appropriate here; 'was able to get' is better to express achievement. Also, 'short stop' should be one word 'shortstop'. The preposition 'as' is used to indicate the role or position held.