News— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。例如“listening news”应改为“listening to the news”，并且避免无关内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am very interested in news because it helps me broaden my horizons and stay informed about important events happening around the world.

Sugerencia: 回答应更连贯，注意语法和词汇准确性，如“news website”应为“news websites”，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I usually find news through online platforms, especially news websites and social media, because they are convenient and provide real-time updates on various topics. For example, I have downloaded the BBC and The Economist apps on my phone.

Sugerencia: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免重复和不完整句子。表达理由时应清晰且连贯。

Ejemplo: Although I like news, I don't want to be a journalist because I get homesick easily and prefer a stable life rather than traveling around the world frequently.

Sugerencia: 回答应避免重复，句子应完整且连贯。可以用连接词连接动作，表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I read the news this morning. I usually drink a cup of tea and watch CCTV on my TV to catch up on what happened.

Sugerencia: 回答应避免重复，使用更准确的词汇如“discuss”代替“have a discourse”，并使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news. We usually gather in our dormitory to discuss current events and share our opinions.

× I think listening news, listening to Daily News, could burn my horizons and tell me what happened in world.

✓ I think listening to news, listening to the Daily News, could broaden my horizons and tell me what happened in the world.

动词listen后面需要加介词to，表示“听某物”。此外，短语“burn my horizons”不合适，应该用“broaden my horizons”表示“开阔视野”。“in world”缺少冠词，应该是“in the world”。

× I think listening news, listening to Daily News, could burn my horizons and tell me what happened in world.

✓ I think listening to news, listening to the Daily News, could broaden my horizons and tell me what happened in the world.

“listening news”缺少介词“to”，正确用法是“listening to news”。“in world”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“in the world”。

× I think listening news, listening to Daily News, could burn my horizons and tell me what happened in world.

✓ I think listening to news, listening to the Daily News, could broaden my horizons and tell me what happened in the world.

“Daily News”前面需要加定冠词“the”，因为这是特指的新闻名称。“in world”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“in the world”。

× Unlike the post I today I usually find news through online platforms, especially news website and social media is so convenient and provide real time updates on various topics.

✓ Unlike the past, today I usually find news through online platforms, especially news websites and social media, which are so convenient and provide real-time updates on various topics.

“Unlike the post”应为“Unlike the past”，表示“与过去不同”。“news website”应为复数“news websites”，因为指多个网站。句子中缺少连接词“which”引导定语从句。

× Unlike the post I today I usually find news through online platforms, especially news website and social media is so convenient and provide real time updates on various topics.

✓ Unlike the past, today I usually find news through online platforms, especially news websites and social media, which are so convenient and provide real-time updates on various topics.

“news website”应为复数“news websites”，因为指多个网站。主语“news websites and social media”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”和“provide”。

× For examples I download BBC and Economies in my phone.

✓ For example, I download BBC and The Economist on my phone.

“For examples”应为“For example”，表示举例。杂志名称“The Economist”拼写错误且缺少定冠词“the”。“in my phone”应为“on my phone”，表示在手机上。

× Sorry, sorry, even I like the news, but I don't want to be a journalist.

✓ Sorry, sorry, even though I like the news, I don't want to be a journalist.

“even I like the news”语法不完整，正确表达应为“even though I like the news”，表示“尽管我喜欢新闻”。

× I think I'm a man who are easily to be homesick and I don't want to live with a such a life that need to going around the world and couldn't stay in a.

✓ I think I'm a man who is easily homesick, and I don't want to live such a life that needs to go around the world and can't stay in one place.

关系代词who后面谓语动词应与先行词man保持单数，故用“is”。“easily to be homesick”表达错误，应为“easily homesick”。“need to going”应为“needs to go”。“couldn't stay in a”不完整，应为“can't stay in one place”。

× Of course they are.

✓ Of course they are.

该句无明显时态错误，保持原句。

× Every time when I get up I used to drink, drink a cup of tea and watch CCTV on my TV.

✓ Every time when I get up, I usually drink a cup of tea and watch CCTV on my TV.

“used to drink, drink a cup of tea”表达重复且不准确，应改为“usually drink a cup of tea”，表示习惯动作。

× Watch CCTV to know what happened.

✓ I watch CCTV to know what happened.

句子缺少主语“I”，应补充完整。

× Yeah, so that is a good way to express our opinions and have a discourse with my classmates about the news happened, happened today.

✓ Yeah, so that is a good way to express our opinions and have a discussion with my classmates about the news that happened today.

“have a discourse”用法不当，通常用“have a discussion”。“the news happened, happened today”重复，应简化为“the news that happened today”。

× We usually gather in our dormitory and just talk around the world.

✓ We usually gather in our dormitory and just talk about the world.

“talk around the world”表达错误，应为“talk about the world”，表示“谈论世界”。