News— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly stating your interest and then giving a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay updated about what is happening around the world.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I usually get news through social media apps like Instagram and Facebook because they are convenient and I can read news anytime at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons using proper sentence structure and linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to be a journalist because it requires many skills and qualities, and I think it would be a difficult job for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to keep your answer simple and clear, directly answering the question with relevant details and correct tenses.

Ejemplo: Yes, I read the news this morning after waking up early. I learned about the increasing flood problems in some areas.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and has repetition. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I don't often talk with my friends about the news because of my busy schedule. However, if there is an important headline, I sometimes discuss it with them.

× No, I don't like to become a journalist because they becoming a journalist and there are a lot of qualities which are important to become a journalist.

✓ No, I don't like to become a journalist because they are becoming journalists and there are a lot of qualities which are important to become a journalist.

The phrase 'they becoming a journalist' is incorrect because the verb 'becoming' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'a journalist' should be plural 'journalists' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. The correct form is 'they are becoming journalists'.

× Yes, definitely. I apparently remember and I wake up, woke up early at 6:00 PM and that time after that I read the newspaper and I read that the newspaper and I came to know about the floods and eat.

✓ Yes, definitely. I clearly remember that I woke up early at 6:00 AM and after that I read the newspaper and came to know about the floods and so on.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect time expression. 'I wake up, woke up' mixes present and past tense; it should be past tense 'I woke up'. Also, '6:00 PM' is likely a mistake for morning time, so corrected to '6:00 AM'. The phrase 'and eat' is unclear and replaced with 'and so on' to indicate continuation. The sentence is corrected to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well, due to the advancement of technology, there are several applications through which I prefer to get newspapers and news regards such as Instagram, Facebook and many more.

✓ Well, due to the advancement of technology, there are several applications through which I prefer to get newspapers and news updates, such as Instagram, Facebook and many more.

The phrase 'news regards' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'news updates' or simply 'news'. 'Regards' is not used in this context. The correction improves clarity and proper usage of nouns related to news.

× I think it is the convenient source of getting news while sitting at home everyone and at the time.

✓ I think it is a convenient source of getting news while sitting at home anytime and anywhere.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Everyone and at the time' is incorrect and confusing. The correction replaces it with 'anytime and anywhere' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Then I I then I prefer to to.

✓ Then I prefer to do so.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words 'I I' and 'to to'. The correction completes the sentence meaningfully by adding 'do so' to indicate the action referred to earlier, and removes repetition.