News— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: သင်၏အဖြေတွင် သဘာဝကျပြီး ထိရောက်မှုရှိရန် စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "interesting" ကို "interested" ဟု ပြင်ရန်၊ "mainly topic" ကို "main topics" ဟု ပြင်ရန်လိုအပ်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုသေချာစွာ ဖော်ပြရန်နှင့် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုသက်ဆိုင်သော စကားလုံးများဖြင့် ပြောင်းလဲအသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။

Ejemplo: Honestly, I'm not very interested in the news, especially about my own country, because the main topics are often about distractions and crimes. Moreover, such topics can make me feel worried, so I prefer to listen only to important news.

Sugerencia: သင်၏အဖြေတွင် ပိုမိုသဘာဝကျပြီး စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "all are free" ကို "all are free of charge" ဟု ပြင်ရန်၊ "more concentration" ကို "better concentration" ဟု ပြင်ရန်လိုအပ်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် ဆက်စပ်စကားလုံးများဖြင့် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုချိတ်ဆက်ရန် လိုအပ်သည်။

Ejemplo: I usually watch news on YouTube because this platform is free of charge. Additionally, we can access full episodes and see pictures, which help us concentrate better on the topic.

Sugerencia: သင်၏အဖြေတွင် သဘာဝကျပြီး စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "informations" ကို "information" ဟု ပြင်ရန်၊ "Even I have a chance and skill" ကို "Even if I had the chance and skills" ဟု ပြင်ရန်လိုအပ်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုသက်ဆိုင်သော စကားလုံးများဖြင့် ပြောင်းလဲအသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။

Ejemplo: No, I've never imagined myself as a journalist. Even if I had the chance and skills to pursue it as a career, I don't really like presenting information in front of the camera. I prefer to be a writer or an editor.

Sugerencia: သင်၏အဖြေတွင် သဘာဝကျပြီး စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "haven't do that" ကို "haven't done that" ဟု ပြင်ရန်၊ "it took over 1 hours" ကို "it took over an hour" ဟု ပြင်ရန်လိုအပ်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုသက်ဆိုင်သော စကားလုံးများဖြင့် ပြောင်းလဲအသုံးပြုရန်နှင့် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစွာ ဖော်ပြရန် လိုအပ်သည်။

Ejemplo: No, I haven't done that because I needed to prepare for my test. I woke up at six, prepared my clothes, and after finishing, I took the bus which took over an hour. Finally, I arrived here.

Sugerencia: သင်၏အဖြေတွင် သဘာဝကျပြီး စကားလုံးများကို မှန်ကန်စွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ "didn't interest" ကို "aren't interested" ဟု ပြင်ရန်၊ "that topics are the main" ကို "those topics are the main ones" ဟု ပြင်ရန်လိုအပ်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုချိတ်ဆက်ပြီး ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစွာ ဖော်ပြရန် လိုအပ်သည်။

Ejemplo: No, we don't talk much about the news. I think all of my friends aren't interested in the news because when we are together, we always discuss our future plans or how to apply to universities abroad. Those topics are the main focus.

× Honestly, I'm not very interesting in news, especially about my own country, because the mainly topic are distractions and crimes and worse, those topics can run my holding, so I prefer only to listen the important topic.

✓ Honestly, I'm not very interested in news, especially about my own country, because the main topics are distractions and crimes and worse, those topics can run my mood, so I prefer only to listen to the important topics.

The phrase 'interesting in' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in' because 'interested' is the correct adjective to express one's feelings about a subject. Also, 'mainly topic' should be 'main topics' to match plural form and correct adjective use. 'Listen the important topic' should be 'listen to the important topics' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' and the noun should be plural to match context.

× Honestly, I'm not very interesting in news, especially about my own country, because the mainly topic are distractions and crimes and worse, those topics can run my holding, so I prefer only to listen the important topic.

✓ Honestly, I'm not very interested in news, especially about my own country, because the main topics are distractions and crimes and worse, those topics can run my mood, so I prefer only to listen to the important topics.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with the plural verb 'are' and the context indicating multiple subjects. Also, 'holding' seems incorrect and likely a typo for 'mood' or 'holding' is misused; 'mood' fits better here.

× I usually watch them from YouTube because from this platform all are free and we can access the whole episodes and we can also see the pictures which can help us to have a more concentration on the topic.

✓ I usually watch them on YouTube because on this platform all are free and we can access the whole episodes and we can also see the pictures which can help us to concentrate more on the topic.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when referring to watching videos on a platform; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'have a more concentration' is incorrect; it should be 'concentrate more' or 'have more concentration'.

× I usually watch them from YouTube because from this platform all are free and we can access the whole episodes and we can also see the pictures which can help us to have a more concentration on the topic.

✓ I usually watch them on YouTube because on this platform all are free and we can access the whole episodes and we can also see the pictures which can help us concentrate more on the topic.

The phrase 'a more concentration' is incorrect because 'concentration' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The correct form is 'concentrate more' or 'have more concentration' without 'a'.

× No, I've never imagined myself to be a journalist. Even I have a chance and skill to do as a career. I don't really like to present informations in front of the camera. I prefer to be a writer, journalist.

✓ No, I've never imagined myself to be a journalist. Even if I had a chance and the skill to do it as a career, I don't really like to present information in front of the camera. I prefer to be a writer or journalist.

The sentence 'Even I have a chance and skill to do as a career' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'Even if I had a chance and the skill to do it as a career' to express a hypothetical situation. 'Informations' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable and does not take a plural form. Also, 'writer, journalist' should be 'writer or journalist' to indicate choice.

× No I haven't do that because as I need to prepare for my test I woke up at six and prepare my clothes and after finishing I took the bus and it took over 1 hours and finally here I'm at.

✓ No, I haven't done that because I needed to prepare for my test. I woke up at six and prepared my clothes, and after finishing, I took the bus which took over 1 hour, and finally, here I am.

The phrase 'haven't do' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'haven't done'. The verbs 'need' and 'prepare' should be in past tense 'needed' and 'prepared' to maintain past tense consistency. '1 hours' should be '1 hour' because 'hour' is singular. The sentence ending 'here I'm at' is incorrect; it should be 'here I am'.

× No, we don't talk too much about the news. I think all of my friends also they didn't interest in the news because when we are together we always talk about our future plans or how to apply universities abroad, that topics are the main.

✓ No, we don't talk too much about the news. I think all of my friends are also not interested in the news because when we are together we always talk about our future plans or how to apply to universities abroad; those topics are the main ones.

The phrase 'they didn't interest in the news' is incorrect; it should be 'are not interested in the news' to express current state. 'That topics' should be 'those topics' to match plural and demonstrative adjective. Also, 'apply universities' should be 'apply to universities' because 'apply' requires the preposition 'to'.