News— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, correct vocabulary and avoid irrelevant words. Give a brief topic sentence stating your interest, then one supporting reason with a linking word. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I'm not very interested in the news because I find much of it repetitive and negative. However, I do follow headlines occasionally to stay informed about major events.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence about your usual method, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (tense and word order) and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I usually get news on my mobile phone because it's convenient and fast. For example, I follow a couple of news apps and social media alerts, so I can check headlines anywhere and get real-time updates.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and direct—good. To improve, add a short reason using a linking word to make it more informative and natural (one supporting sentence).

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I prefer working in business. For instance, I enjoy planning and running projects, so I want to become a businesswoman.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct vocabulary. Start with a clear yes/no and then give a specific reason. Avoid invented expressions and unclear time references. Keep to 1–2 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I worked late last night and needed to sleep. I plan to catch up on the headlines later today.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear frequency statement and then give specific topics you discuss using linking words. Use correct noun forms and clear examples rather than fragmented phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I discuss news with my friends, especially about important topics. For example, we talk about health issues like COVID-19, exam and board results, or school activities when they affect us.

× To be honest, I do not have much interest in users.

✓ To be honest, I do not have much interest in news.

The speaker likely meant 'news' but used 'users', which is incorrect pronoun/noun choice. Replace 'users' with the correct noun 'news' to match the question about news. Also 'much interest in news' is natural usage.

× For me it's a kind of boring thing.

✓ For me, it's kind of boring.

'A kind of' plus 'thing' is redundant and wordy. Use 'kind of boring' or 'a bit boring'. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase 'For me' for clarity.

× Nowadays technology advanced stage by day I usually heard news on my mobile phone if ever I have to check the latest updates about the news.

✓ Nowadays, as technology advances, I usually hear news on my mobile phone when I want to check the latest updates.

The original sentence has incorrect word order, tense, and extra phrases. Use present simple 'advances' for a general fact, 'hear news' (or 'get news'), and 'when I want to check' to express purpose. Remove redundant 'about the news'.

× So usually check on my mobile phone because it I can easily because it is accurate and I can easily there anywhere anytime.

✓ So I usually check my phone because it is accurate and I can access it anywhere, anytime.

Missing subject 'I' and repeated phrases create confusion. Use 'check my phone' and 'access it anywhere, anytime' for concise, grammatical expression.

× No, I don't like to be a journalist.

✓ No, I don't want to be a journalist.

The original is grammatically acceptable but 'don't like to be' is awkward for future career intention. 'Don't want to be' more clearly expresses career preference. This is a usage suggestion rather than strict agreement error.

× I want to become a businesswoman.

✓ I want to become a businesswoman.

This sentence is already correct; no grammatical change is necessary. It correctly uses 'want to' + base verb and expresses intention.

× To be honest, I do not have much time to read the note this morning because generally I worked a night of eleventy 7 into my working hours.

✓ To be honest, I did not have much time to read the news this morning because I generally worked a night shift until 7 during my working hours.

Several issues: 'read the note' should be 'read the news'; tense should be past 'did not have' for this morning; 'worked a night of eleventy 7' is unclear — replace with 'worked a night shift until 7'. This corrects pronoun/noun misuse and clarifies time expressions.

× I want to prepare for to read the news.

✓ I wanted to prepare to read the news.

After referring to 'this morning' the past tense 'wanted' is appropriate. Also 'prepare for to read' is incorrect — use 'prepare to read' or 'prepare for reading'. This fixes verb form and infinitive usage.

× Yes, sometimes.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do.

Elliptical answers are acceptable, but adding 'I do' makes the sentence complete and clear. This is a style improvement rather than strict grammatical error.

× I often talk with my friends about the news, if the news is later.

✓ I often talk with my friends about the news if it is important or recent.

'If the news is later' is unclear. Replace with 'if it is important or recent' for clarity. Also maintain 'talk with my friends about the news' which is correct.

× Who are studies, any extra quality, any extracurricular things, any serious matters such as COVID-19 exam results, board exam results that I may really discuss with my friends.

✓ We discuss study-related issues, extracurricular activities, and serious matters such as COVID-19, exam results, and board results.

The original is fragmented and contains incorrect relative clause 'Who are studies'. Recast as a list with parallel structure: 'We discuss X, Y, and Z.' This fixes sentence structure and word choice, and clarifies meaning.