Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，并且尽量简洁明了地回答问题。

Ejemplo: I am not sure because my parents were very busy, so I was mostly raised by my grandparents.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且有重复，缺少具体细节。建议直接回答问题，避免犹豫和重复，并提供具体例子来丰富内容。

Ejemplo: I like to share funny stories or jokes to make people laugh and lighten the mood.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并用更具体的词汇表达观点。

Ejemplo: I think personal matters are not suitable for sharing because they are private and people may not want others to know about their personal life.

Sugerencia: 回答含糊且有语法错误，缺乏连贯性。建议使用完整句子，避免口头语，清晰表达最近分享的具体内容。

Ejemplo: Recently, my colleague and I have shared small details about our lives. For example, last night I told her a vivid and funny story from my day.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确。建议注意语法结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并简洁明了地说明理由。

Ejemplo: I would share good news with my mom first because she is like a wise friend who knows me well and always supports me sincerely.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，清楚区分不同朋友间分享的内容。

Ejemplo: It depends on the friend. With some, I share personal and deep news, but with others, I only share everyday, casual things.

× my parents was both busy

✓ my parents were both busy

“parents”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”，而不是单数“was”。

× I pretty much is raised by my I pretty much was raised by my grandparents.

✓ I pretty much was raised by my grandparents.

句中“I pretty much is raised”时态和主谓不一致，应改为过去时“was raised”，且去掉重复部分。

× make people laugh and through a funny story or the vivid joke

✓ make people laugh and tell a funny story or a vivid joke

“through”用错，应为动词“tell”表示讲述故事，且“the vivid joke”应改为不定冠词“a vivid joke”。

× I didn't see them a lot of time

✓ I didn't see them a lot of times

“a lot of time”通常指时间长度，表达次数应使用“a lot of times”。

× people may not like like like to have a lot of people to know their own business

✓ people may not like to have a lot of people know their own business

重复“like”错误，且“to have a lot of people to know”结构不正确，应去掉第二个“to”。

× Sometimes she will share a funny story about her.

✓ Sometimes she shares a funny story about herself.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，“will share”不合适；“about her”应改为反身代词“about herself”。

× Last night I will share something, uh, something mar, something quite vivid story for me, uh.

✓ Last night I shared something, uh, something more, something quite vivid for me.

“Last night”表示过去时间，谓语应使用过去时“shared”；“something mar”应为“something more”；“something quite vivid story”结构不正确，应去掉“story”或调整句子结构。

× she's kind of like wiser friends for me

✓ she's kind of like a wiser friend for me

“friends”应为单数“friend”，且前面需加不定冠词“a”。

× she is the person I know well

✓ she is the person I know well

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× Really happy for me, will be really honestly happy for me, and she will support me no matter what.

✓ She is really happy for me, will be honestly happy for me, and she will support me no matter what.

缺少主语，应补充“she is”使句子完整。

× Some friend I will share something deep, uh something personal, but some friend, but the other I would just share the normal thing

✓ Some friends I will share something deep, uh something personal, but other friends I would just share the normal thing

“friend”应使用复数“friends”，且“some friend”与“the other”搭配不当，应统一复数形式。

× Those friend does not get personal for myself.

✓ Those friends do not get personal with me.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，“does”应改为“do”与复数主语一致；“get personal for myself”表达不当，应改为“get personal with me”。