Sharing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, my parents teached me to share when I was a kid because I had a sister younger than me so I always shared my clothes, my toys, my food, my snacks with her So yes I. Ours.
Examinador
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
Candidato
I like to share many things with others. For example, I always share these snacks with my roommates. The traditional local snacks can bring us closer.
Examinador
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
Candidato
Some some personal and precious things are not suitable for sharing. For example, the bars, the short treasures, they are not suitable for sharing, I think.
Examinador
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
Candidato
Yes, in China we are. Yes in China we have 7 day off because of the national day. I went back home and Braille brought some traditional snacks from my hometown. I shared them with my roommates and they all said it's.
Examinador
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
Candidato
I think it must be my parents. I like to share my good news and problem in my life with them because they are truly hope for my well-being and my good future.
Examinador
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
Candidato
I shared both good news and bad things with my friends. For example, when I got a first place in the competition I shared with them. And when I get in trouble in my schoolwork, I shared with them as well because I can always gain support from them.
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Part 1
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误（如“teached”应为“taught”），且句子结构不够清晰，最后部分“so yes I. Ours.”表达不完整。建议注意动词时态和语法，保持句子完整且逻辑清晰。
Ejemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because I have a younger sister. I often shared my clothes, toys, and snacks with her, which helped me learn the importance of sharing.
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答较为简洁，但缺少更多具体细节和连接词。建议增加更多具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: I like to share various things with others. For instance, I often share traditional local snacks with my roommates because sharing food helps strengthen our friendship.
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇“some some”，且表达不够准确，“bars, the short treasures”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇，并避免重复。
Ejemplo: Some personal and valuable items, such as jewelry and important documents, are not suitable for sharing because they are private and precious.
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整（如“Braille brought”，“they all said it's”），句子不连贯。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性。
Ejemplo: Yes, recently we had a seven-day holiday for National Day in China. I went back home and brought some traditional snacks from my hometown. I shared them with my roommates, and they really enjoyed them.
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了主要观点，但语法和用词有误（如“they are truly hope”应为“they truly hope”）。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。
Ejemplo: I think the first person I would like to share good news with is my parents because they truly care about my well-being and future.
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 回答内容完整且有例子，但时态不统一（“shared”与“get”混用），建议保持时态一致，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: I share both good and bad news with my friends. For example, I told them when I won first place in a competition, and I also share my schoolwork problems with them because they always support me.
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