Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and focus on concise, direct responses. For example, use past tense correctly and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Sharing was the first lesson my parents taught me, especially since we were six children at home and had to share everything among us.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and organise your answer with clear examples. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I like to share various things, especially personal items and knowledge. For instance, I often share useful information or advice with my friends.

Sugerencia: Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words. Provide clear examples and explain why certain things are unsuitable for sharing to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: I believe personal items like mobile phones or specific clothes are not suitable for sharing because they are used daily and may carry germs or personal data.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words. Make your answer more concise and coherent by linking ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, recently I shared my car with my sister who just moved to Australia. Since she doesn't have a car, she borrows mine to run errands, and I'm happy to help her.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid repetition and filler words. Explain your reasons clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I would share good news with my mother first because she is my closest friend and always genuinely happy for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts fully, avoid filler words, and provide specific examples of the kind of news you share with friends.

Ejemplo: With my friends, I usually share general news like events or interesting stories, but I rarely discuss very personal matters.

× This is the first thing that my parents learn me about it uh, especially because we was uh, six kids in the house, so we had to share uh, things between us so.

✓ This is the first thing that my parents taught me about it, especially because we were six kids in the house, so we had to share things between us.

The verb 'learn' is incorrectly used instead of the past participle 'taught' which is the correct form for teaching someone. Also, 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. The sentence needed correction for past participle usage and subject-verb agreement.

× This is the first thing that my parents learn me about it uh, especially because we was uh, six kids in the house, so we had to share uh, things between us so.

✓ This is the first thing that my parents taught me about it, especially because we were six kids in the house, so we had to share things between us.

The verb 'was' is incorrect for the plural subject 'we'; it should be 'were' to correctly reflect past tense plural form.

× For me, I can share anything umm it could be a personal stuff or maybe uh I can share the help the the knowledge are specially.

✓ For me, I can share anything; it could be personal stuff or maybe I can share help or knowledge especially.

The modal verb 'can' is correctly used, but the sentence structure is awkward and unclear. 'The help the the knowledge are specially' is incorrect; it should be 'help or knowledge especially' to make sense and be grammatically correct.

× For me, I can share anything umm it could be a personal stuff or maybe uh I can share the help the the knowledge are specially.

✓ For me, I can share anything; it could be personal stuff or maybe I can share help or knowledge especially.

'Personal stuff' is uncountable and should not have 'a' before it. Also, 'the help the the knowledge are specially' is incorrect; 'help' and 'knowledge' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralized or preceded by 'the' unnecessarily.

× Yes, Recently I shared my car uh, because my sister just moved here to Australia and she don't have uh, a car, so sometimes she needed to uh, finish some stuffs outside.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my car because my sister just moved here to Australia and she doesn't have a car, so sometimes she needs to finish some stuff outside.

The pronoun 'she' is correct but the verb 'don't' should be 'doesn't' to agree with third person singular. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

× Yes, Recently I shared my car uh, because my sister just moved here to Australia and she don't have uh, a car, so sometimes she needed to uh, finish some stuffs outside.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my car because my sister just moved here to Australia and she doesn't have a car, so sometimes she needs to finish some stuff outside.

The verb 'don't' is incorrect for third person singular subject 'she'; it should be 'doesn't'. Also, 'needed' should be 'needs' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, Recently I shared my car uh, because my sister just moved here to Australia and she don't have uh, a car, so sometimes she needed to uh, finish some stuffs outside.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my car because my sister just moved here to Australia and she doesn't have a car, so sometimes she needs to finish some stuff outside.

'Stuffs' is incorrect as 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Uh, my mother, she's my first friend and I always, uh, love to share my good news with her Firstly, uh, because she's only the, the person that he will be happy.

✓ Uh, my mother, she's my first friend and I always love to share my good news with her firstly because she's the only person who will be happy.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'my mother'; it should be 'who' to refer to the person. Also, 'only the, the person' is redundant and should be 'the only person'.

× Uh, my mother, she's my first friend and I always, uh, love to share my good news with her Firstly, uh, because she's only the, the person that he will be happy.

✓ Uh, my mother, she's my first friend and I always love to share my good news with her firstly because she's the only person who will be happy.

The conjunction 'that' is incorrectly used; 'who' is the correct relative pronoun for people. Also, the sentence needed better flow without unnecessary commas.