Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi từ vựng sai (ví dụ: 'threatened' nên là 'taught', 'selling toys and snakes' nên là 'sharing toys and snacks'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. My parents always taught me the importance of sharing, especially with my younger siblings and cousins. They said that sharing toys and snacks helps build strong relationships and shows kindness to others.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'subway tricks' có thể không phù hợp, 'sturdy methods' không rõ nghĩa). Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời có liên kết logic hơn.

Ejemplo: I like to share knowledge and skills the most. For example, if I learn a new study technique or an effective method, I immediately share it with my classmates or colleagues because I believe information should be free to help everyone succeed.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'broke a personal items', 'high turn hygiene', 'confidential confidential information of rebate dated'). Cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I think personal items related to hygiene, such as toothbrushes or towels, are definitely not suitable for sharing. Also, in a professional context, any confidential information should never be shared.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng về từ vựng và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'masturbate' sai từ, 'delicious trees' không đúng nghĩa). Cần dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời rõ ràng, tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Recently, I discovered an excellent new coffee shop near my workplace that serves amazing coffee. I've been recommending it to all my friends and colleagues so they can enjoy the delicious drinks and relax there.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng lặp lại (ví dụ: 'enthusiastic, enthusiastic', 'supportive uh, there are western'). Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn.

Ejemplo: The first person I would share good news with is definitely my best friend. We have been close for a long time, and they are always very supportive and understanding.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'patterns' có thể sai, 'plan, fulfill the trip' không rõ nghĩa). Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

Ejemplo: I share all kinds of news, but mainly personal achievements like passing important exams or getting a new job. I also share funny everyday anecdotes or plans for upcoming trips. I usually share anything positive and interesting.

× My parents always threatened the importance of sharing, especially with my younger siblings and cousins.

✓ My parents always stressed the importance of sharing, especially with my younger siblings and cousins.

The verb 'threatened' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'stressed' to express emphasizing importance. 'Threatened' means to warn of harm, which is not the intended meaning.

× They told me that selling toys and snakes was a way to build strong relationship and be kind to other.

✓ They told me that sharing toys and snacks was a way to build strong relationships and be kind to others.

'Selling' is incorrect; contextually, 'sharing' fits better. 'Snakes' should be 'snacks'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple relationships. 'Other' should be 'others' to refer to other people.

× I like to share knowledge and skills the most.

✓ I like to share knowledge and skills the most.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× if I learn a new subway tricks or a good sturdy methods, I immediately share it with my classmates or colleagues.

✓ if I learn a new subway trick or a good sturdy method, I immediately share it with my classmates or colleagues.

'Tricks' and 'methods' are plural but preceded by 'a' which is singular. They should be singular to match the article 'a'.

× I believe information should be free and have everyone succeed.

✓ I believe information should be free and help everyone succeed.

The verb 'have' is incorrectly used here; 'help' is the correct verb to express enabling success.

× I think broke a personal items related to high turn hygiene are definitely not suitable for sharing like toothbrushes or towels.

✓ I think broken personal items related to high-turn hygiene are definitely not suitable for sharing, like toothbrushes or towels.

'Broke' should be 'broken' (past participle). 'A personal items' is incorrect; 'personal items' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'High turn hygiene' is unclear; likely intended 'high germ hygiene' or 'high hygiene standards' but kept as is for minimal correction.

× Also in a pro professional sense, any confidential confidential information of rebate dated should never be.

✓ Also, in a professional sense, any confidential information should never be shared.

'Pro professional' is redundant; corrected to 'professional'. 'Confidential confidential' is repeated; corrected to single 'confidential'. 'Information of rebate dated' is unclear and incomplete; simplified to 'confidential information'. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× Recently I discovered an excellent new coffee shop near my workplace that serve amazing masturbate.

✓ Recently I discovered an excellent new coffee shop near my workplace that serves amazing coffee.

'Serve' should be 'serves' to agree with singular subject 'coffee shop'. 'Masturbate' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; replaced with 'coffee' to fit context.

× I've been recommending to it to all my friends and colleagues so they can enjoy the delicious trees and rate US movie there too.

✓ I've been recommending it to all my friends and colleagues so they can enjoy the delicious treats and great US movies there too.

'Recommending to it' is incorrect; correct form is 'recommending it to'. 'Trees' should be 'treats'. 'Rate US movie' is unclear; corrected to 'great US movies' for meaning.

× The first person I would say good news with is definitely my best friends.

✓ The first person I would share good news with is definitely my best friend.

'Say good news with' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'share good news with'. 'Best friends' is plural but 'person' is singular; corrected to singular 'best friend'.

× We have been close for a long time and they are always the most enthusiastic, enthusiastic and support.

✓ We have been close for a long time and they are always the most enthusiastic and supportive.

Repeated 'enthusiastic' is redundant; corrected to single. 'Support' should be adjective 'supportive' to describe people.

× Their supportive uh, there are western who understand me, my children the best.

✓ They are supportive, the ones who understand me and my children the best.

Sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'There are western' is incorrect; corrected to 'the ones'. 'Supportive uh' corrected to 'They are supportive'. Added 'and' for clarity.

× I share all kinds of news but mainly personal achievement like patterns and important exam or or getting a new job I always say.

✓ I share all kinds of news but mainly personal achievements like passing important exams or getting a new job.

'Achievement' should be plural 'achievements'. 'Patterns' is incorrect; likely intended 'passing'. 'Exam' should be plural 'exams'. Removed redundant 'or' and 'I always say' which is unclear.

× I also share funny everyday, uh, anecdotes, uh, or plan, fulfill the trip.

✓ I also share funny everyday anecdotes or plans to fulfill trips.

'Plan, fulfill the trip' is unclear; corrected to 'plans to fulfill trips' for clarity. Removed filler words 'uh'.

× Anything that is positive or instructive and interesting.

✓ Anything that is positive, instructive, and interesting.

Added commas for correct listing of adjectives.