Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“should sharing”应为“should share”，并且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because it helps me make new friends and build good relationships.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“share with them”缺少主语，且“positive feedbacks”应为“positive feedback”。建议使用完整句子，并注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。

Ejemplo: I often share snacks with my friends, especially my roommates, because we spend a lot of time together. When I eat something I really like, I share it with them, and they always give me positive feedback.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“mobile are”应为“mobile phones are”，句子未完整表达意思。建议完整表达观点，注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

Ejemplo: I think mobile phones are not suitable for sharing because they contain a lot of personal information like messages and photos. Sharing them could lead to privacy issues.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“this book are”应为“this book is”，“finish the passenger”表达不明确。建议使用准确的词汇和清晰的句子表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, recently I shared my textbook with my roommate because it is very important for her to complete the course. Sharing it also saved her from buying a new one.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，如“who she is”应为“who is”，“we know more than four years”应为“we have known each other for more than four years”，表达不自然。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法。

Ejemplo: I would like to share good news with my best friend, who is also my roommate. We have known each other for more than four years, and she is very reliable.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“we are we are study”应为“we are studying”，“this is message are”应为“these messages are”。建议注意语法和句子连贯性。

Ejemplo: I always share news about the economy with my friends because we are studying financial management. These news help us learn the subject better.

× Yes, my parent had told me I should sharing with other since this can help me make new friends and don't feel lonely in the association and it also can help me have a good relationship.

✓ Yes, my parents told me I should share with others since this can help me make new friends and not feel lonely in the association, and it can also help me have a good relationship.

这里“had told”使用了过去完成时，语境中只需一般过去时“told”。“parent”应为复数“parents”，因为指的是父母双方。动词“sharing”应改为动词原形“share”，因为情态动词“should”后接动词原形。"other"应为复数“others”。"don't"应改为“not”以符合句子结构。

× Yes, my parent had told me I should sharing with other since this can help me make new friends and don't feel lonely in the association and it also can help me have a good relationship.

✓ Yes, my parents told me I should share with others since this can help me make new friends and not feel lonely in the association, and it can also help me have a good relationship.

“parent”应为复数形式“parents”，因为指的是父母双方。"other"应为复数“others”，表示其他人。

× Yes, my parent had told me I should sharing with other since this can help me make new friends and don't feel lonely in the association and it also can help me have a good relationship.

✓ Yes, my parents told me I should share with others since this can help me make new friends and not feel lonely in the association, and it can also help me have a good relationship.

情态动词“should”后应接动词原形，不能接动名词“sharing”。

× Yes, my parent had told me I should sharing with other since this can help me make new friends and don't feel lonely in the association and it also can help me have a good relationship.

✓ Yes, my parents told me I should share with others since this can help me make new friends and not feel lonely in the association, and it can also help me have a good relationship.

“other”应为复数形式“others”，表示其他人。

× I often share snacks with my friends, especially my roommates because we always stay together. So sometimes if I eat some foods I really like, share with them and they always give me the positive feedbacks.

✓ I often share snacks with my friends, especially my roommates because we always stay together. So sometimes if I eat some food I really like, I share it with them and they always give me positive feedback.

“foods”应为不可数名词“food”。“share”前缺少主语“I”。“feedbacks”不可数，改为“feedback”。

× I often share snacks with my friends, especially my roommates because we always stay together. So sometimes if I eat some foods I really like, share with them and they always give me the positive feedbacks.

✓ I often share snacks with my friends, especially my roommates because we always stay together. So sometimes if I eat some food I really like, I share it with them and they always give me positive feedback.

“foods”应为不可数名词“food”。“feedback”是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× I think mobile are not suitable for sharing since there are lots of personal information such as the message and photos. Sharing them with others may lead to privacy issues, so I often.

✓ I think mobiles are not suitable for sharing since there is a lot of personal information such as messages and photos. Sharing them with others may lead to privacy issues, so I often avoid it.

“mobile”应为复数“mobiles”。“information”是不可数名词，谓语应用单数“is”。“message”应为复数“messages”。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整表达。

× I think mobile are not suitable for sharing since there are lots of personal information such as the message and photos. Sharing them with others may lead to privacy issues, so I often.

✓ I think mobiles are not suitable for sharing since there is a lot of personal information such as messages and photos. Sharing them with others may lead to privacy issues, so I often avoid it.

“mobile”应为复数“mobiles”。“message”应为复数“messages”。

× I think mobile are not suitable for sharing since there are lots of personal information such as the message and photos. Sharing them with others may lead to privacy issues, so I often.

✓ I think mobiles are not suitable for sharing since there is a lot of personal information such as messages and photos. Sharing them with others may lead to privacy issues, so I often avoid it.

句子末尾“so I often.”不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充完整。

× Yes, recently I had shared my textbook to my roommate because this book are very important to help her finish the passenger. At the same time sharing with her means they didn't buy a new one.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my textbook with my roommate because this book is very important to help her finish the passage. At the same time, sharing with her means she didn't have to buy a new one.

“had shared”改为一般过去时“shared”更合适。介词“to”应改为“with”。“book are”应为“book is”。“passenger”应为“passage”。“they didn't buy a new one”主语应为“she”，且时态调整为“didn't have to buy”。

× Yes, recently I had shared my textbook to my roommate because this book are very important to help her finish the passenger. At the same time sharing with her means they didn't buy a new one.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my textbook with my roommate because this book is very important to help her finish the passage. At the same time, sharing with her means she didn't have to buy a new one.

动词“share”后应接介词“with”，表示“与某人分享”，而非“to”。

× Yes, recently I had shared my textbook to my roommate because this book are very important to help her finish the passenger. At the same time sharing with her means they didn't buy a new one.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my textbook with my roommate because this book is very important to help her finish the passage. At the same time, sharing with her means she didn't have to buy a new one.

“book are”应改为单数形式“book is”，因为“book”是单数。

× Yes, recently I had shared my textbook to my roommate because this book are very important to help her finish the passenger. At the same time sharing with her means they didn't buy a new one.

✓ Yes, recently I shared my textbook with my roommate because this book is very important to help her finish the passage. At the same time, sharing with her means she didn't have to buy a new one.

“they”指代不明确，应改为“she”，指代前文的“my roommate”。

× I want to share good news with my best friend who she is also my roommate and we know more than four years. She is very real reliable person so I very share the message with her.

✓ I want to share good news with my best friend who is also my roommate and we have known each other for more than four years. She is a very real and reliable person, so I often share messages with her.

“who she is”中“she”多余，应去掉。动词“know”应使用现在完成时“have known”。“very real reliable person”缺少冠词且形容词顺序错误，应为“a very real and reliable person”。“I very share”表达错误，应为“I often share”。

× I want to share good news with my best friend who she is also my roommate and we know more than four years. She is very real reliable person so I very share the message with her.

✓ I want to share good news with my best friend who is also my roommate and we have known each other for more than four years. She is a very real and reliable person, so I often share messages with her.

“we know more than four years”应为“we have known each other for more than four years”，使用现在完成时表示持续的动作。

× I want to share good news with my best friend who she is also my roommate and we know more than four years. She is very real reliable person so I very share the message with her.

✓ I want to share good news with my best friend who is also my roommate and we have known each other for more than four years. She is a very real and reliable person, so I often share messages with her.

“very real reliable person”中缺少冠词且形容词顺序不当，应为“a very real and reliable person”。“very share”用法错误，应改为频率副词“often share”。

× I always share message about the economy because we are we are study the financial management. So this is message are very important and help us to learn this subject.

✓ I always share messages about the economy because we are studying financial management. So these messages are very important and help us learn this subject.

“message”应为复数“messages”。“we are we are study”重复且时态错误，应为“we are studying”。“this is message are”结构错误，应为“these messages are”。

× I always share message about the economy because we are we are study the financial management. So this is message are very important and help us to learn this subject.

✓ I always share messages about the economy because we are studying financial management. So these messages are very important and help us learn this subject.

“we are study”时态错误，应为现在进行时“we are studying”。

× I always share message about the economy because we are we are study the financial management. So this is message are very important and help us to learn this subject.

✓ I always share messages about the economy because we are studying financial management. So these messages are very important and help us learn this subject.

“message”应为复数“messages”，因为指多个信息。