Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和冠词的使用。可以更直接地回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

Ejemplo: Yes, my parents taught me to share from a young age. For example, whenever I received gifts or sweets, I would always share them with my siblings and friends because it made me happy to see them enjoy.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够流畅，句子重复且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意词汇搭配。

Ejemplo: I like to share food with my friends, especially because I live alone in a new city. Sharing delicious meals helps me build strong friendships and feel connected with others.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的问题，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免使用不准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: I believe personal gifts from my parents or grandparents are not suitable for sharing. For instance, if I receive a birthday present from them, I prefer to keep it to myself to respect their feelings.

Sugerencia: 回答较完整，但句子较长且有些重复。建议分句表达，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, recently I shared a delicious chocolate cake with my close friend to celebrate my birthday. I had wanted to buy that cake for a long time, so it was a special treat.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态混用且表达不够清晰，建议分开描述过去和现在的情况，使用恰当的连接词。

Ejemplo: When I was young, I usually shared good news with my parents, especially my mother, because I lived with them. Now that I live alone in a new city, I mostly share my news with my friends.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体，但表达有语法和用词错误，建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更准确。

Ejemplo: I usually share news about my research with my friends. For example, when I finish a chapter of my dissertation, I like to share this achievement with my close friends because it is a challenging task and I feel excited.

× Yes, my parents always told me share something to your friends and family will make your day.

✓ Yes, my parents always told me that sharing something with your friends and family will make your day.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（sharing），而且动词后面缺少连接词that，且介词用法错误，应为share with someone。

× Since I was very young so every time when I receive some gifts or candy or pressure gifts I always share it with my friends, sibling and my parents.

✓ Since I was very young, every time I receive some gifts, candy, or precious gifts, I always share them with my friends, siblings, and my parents.

介词使用错误，'pressure gifts'应为'precious gifts'，且'sibling'应为复数'siblings'，'so'与'since'重复，句子应简化。

× I always share it with my friends, sibling and my parents.

✓ I always share them with my friends, siblings, and my parents.

'sibling'应为复数形式'siblings'，且代词应与复数名词一致，使用'them'。

× Well, I think I share food a lot to my friends most because I live alone in new city so I always spend my time with my friends.

✓ Well, I think I share food a lot with my friends mostly because I live alone in a new city, so I always spend my time with my friends.

介词错误，'share'后应接'with'，'most'位置不当，应为'mostly'，'new city'前缺少冠词'a'。

× So every time when I buy something good food and yummy food I always love to share with them and also can help me build a very good relationship.

✓ So every time when I buy good and yummy food, I always love to share it with them, and it also helps me build a very good relationship.

'something good food and yummy food'表达不自然，应简化为'good and yummy food'，缺少代词'it'，句子结构需调整。

× Well, I think a personal gift especially from my parents and grandparents are not suiting for sharing.

✓ Well, I think a personal gift, especially from my parents and grandparents, is not suitable for sharing.

'suiting'用法错误，应为形容词'suitable'，主谓一致错误，'gift'为单数，谓语应为'is'。

× For example, if I receive a birthday gift from my parents, I will definitely cherish them by myself with pressure and the reason is I want to respect their feeling and reduce.

✓ For example, if I receive a birthday gift from my parents, I will definitely cherish it by myself with pleasure because I want to respect their feelings and gratitude.

'them'应为单数'it'，'pressure'应为'pleasure'，'feeling'应为复数'feelings'，句子末尾表达不完整，需调整。

× Yes, I recently shared a delicious chocolate cake with my close friend because it was my birthday and I have been thinking about buying the cake for a long time and I just get it to celebrate the special occasion.

✓ Yes, I recently shared a delicious chocolate cake with my close friend because it was my birthday. I had been thinking about buying the cake for a long time and I just got it to celebrate the special occasion.

时态错误，'have been thinking'应改为过去完成时'had been thinking'，'get'应为过去式'got'。

× Well I think when I was young I always share the thing with my parents, especially my mother first because I live in my family with them.

✓ Well, I think when I was young I always shared things with my parents, especially my mother first because I lived with my family.

'share'时态应为过去时'shared'，'thing'应为复数'things'，'live in my family'表达不自然，应为'lived with my family'。

× But now I live alone in new city so I spend most of time with my friends.

✓ But now I live alone in a new city, so I spend most of my time with my friends.

'new city'前缺少冠词'a'，'most of time'应为'most of my time'。

× So now I would love to share my stuff.

✓ So now I would love to share my stuff.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Well, I think most of thing is about my research news.

✓ Well, I think most of the things are about my research news.

'most of thing'应为'most of the things'，主谓一致，'is'应为'are'。

× For example, if I finish a chapter for my dissertation, I would definitely love to share it with my close friend first because that is too hard and spend most of my time.

✓ For example, if I finish a chapter of my dissertation, I would definitely love to share it with my close friend first because it is very hard and takes most of my time.

'finish'时态应与条件句保持一致，'that is too hard'表达不自然，应为'it is very hard'，'spend'应为'takes'。

× I want to share this excitement.

✓ I want to share this excitement.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。