Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word order (e.g., "taught me" not "teach me").

Ejemplo: Yes. My parents taught me to share from a young age because I am the oldest sibling. For example, they encouraged me to give toys and snacks to my younger siblings, which helped me learn empathy and responsibility.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give a clear reason and a specific example. Use appropriate vocabulary ("share food", "let others try") and correct verbs. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I like to share food with others because good food makes me happy and I want others to enjoy it too. For example, if I find a tasty dessert, I often bring a portion to friends so they can try it.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct plural/singular forms and link reason to an example. Use vocabulary like "personal hygiene items" and a brief example to support your point.

Ejemplo: Personal hygiene items are not suitable for sharing because they can spread infections. For instance, you should not share toothbrushes or razors with others.

Sugerencia: Clarify what you mean ("chorus" is unclear). Use past simple for recent actions and be specific about the item and reason. Structure: topic sentence + brief detail + example.

Ejemplo: Recently I gave away extra kitchen utensils because I had many duplicates and rarely used them. For example, I gave a set of extra mugs to a friend who needed them.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement and provide reasons with linking words. Use correct plural forms and finish your sentence. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I would share good news with my parents first because they always support me. For example, when I get a promotion I call them immediately to tell them because their encouragement matters more than any gift.

Sugerencia: Be specific about the types of news and avoid vague phrases. Use correct grammar and link cause and effect clearly. Provide a short example and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ejemplo: I usually share current events and social news with my friends, as well as light gossip about mutual acquaintances. For example, we often discuss trending stories on social media, although sometimes gossip can create misunderstandings between us.

× Yes, my parents always with me all the time that when they got an opportunity that about how good of sharing because I'm an older sister so I familiar with this skill to share something with someone.

✓ Yes, my parents always taught me to share when I was a child because I am the eldest sister, so I became familiar with the skill of sharing with others.

This sentence has multiple issues (sentence structure, verb tense and missing verbs) but primarily is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The original lacks the verb 'taught', uses awkward clauses and wrong word order. Correct by adding the verb 'taught', using past tense 'was', replacing 'older sister' with 'eldest sister', and reordering phrases for clarity. Suggestion: break long ideas into clear clauses, ensure each clause has a subject and verb, and keep tense consistent.

× I would love to share something like a food.

✓ I would love to share things like food.

This is a verb + -ing/word choice issue (ID 8). 'Something like a food' is awkward and uses an unnecessary article. Use plural 'things' and 'food' without 'a' to sound natural. Suggestion: use 'things like food' or 'food items' when generalizing.

× When I taste something delicious I would love to chat it for anyone to taste it and feel happy like I do.

✓ When I taste something delicious, I would love to share it with others so they can taste it and feel as happy as I do.

Primary problems are incorrect verb choice and sentence structure (ID 26 and ID 8). 'Chat it' is wrong; the intended verb is 'share'. Also preposition use 'for anyone' should be 'with others' and comparative phrasing needs 'as happy as'. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('share') and correct comparative structures.

× The personal hygienic things is not suitable for shares because it can make someone get a disease if you sharing this together.

✓ Personal hygiene items are not suitable for sharing because they can spread disease if you share them.

This is a singular/plural and agreement issue (ID 1) plus incorrect verb forms. 'The personal hygienic things' is unnatural and 'is' should be 'are'. 'Shares' is incorrect; use gerund or infinitive. Also 'make someone get a disease' is awkward — use 'spread disease'. Suggestion: use 'personal hygiene items' and plural verbs, and use 'share' or 'sharing' correctly.

× I recently share the chorus for someone because I have a lot of this and for me I'm not used is much so I think it's better to give it to someone that they can use it properly.

✓ I recently shared the chorus with someone because I have a lot of them and I don't use them much, so I thought it would be better to give them to someone who can use them properly.

This contains a past tense error (ID 5) — 'recently share' should be past 'shared'. There are also pronoun and number issues. 'Chorus' seems incorrect but preserved; assuming 'chorus' means 'choirs' or 'chorus parts', kept neutral as 'them'. Correct by using past tense 'shared', plural pronouns 'them', and relative clause 'who can'. Suggestion: use simple past for actions completed in the recent past and match pronouns and number.

× Of course, my parent at the first person that I will share the good thing for them.

✓ Of course, my parents are the first people I would share good news with.

This is an incorrect use of pronouns and number (ID 12). 'Parent' should be plural 'parents', 'first person' should be 'first people', and prepositions and verb forms adjusted. Suggestion: ensure subject and pronouns agree in number and use natural phrases like 'share good news with'.

× For me they don't want the physical thing, but they would love that if I share the good news for them, they.

✓ They don't want physical gifts; they would prefer me to share good news with them.

This is primarily a sentence structure error (ID 26) and awkward phrasing. The original repeats and ends abruptly. Rephrase to a clear contrast: 'They don't want physical gifts; they would prefer me to share good news with them.' Suggestion: avoid redundancy and complete clauses with clear subjects and verbs.

× We always shares the up-to-date news in a social or some gossip news and we just discuss what going on and what's happened next is make our relationship get cold sometimes.

✓ We always share up-to-date news or gossip on social media, and we discuss what is going on and what happens next; sometimes this can make our relationship grow cold.

Multiple errors: third person singular verb form (ID 2) — 'shares' should be 'share' for 'we'. Also missing preposition 'on social media', incorrect tense forms, and sentence structure issues. 'What's happened next is make our relationship get cold' is ungrammatical; replace with 'what happens next; sometimes this can make our relationship grow cold.' Suggestion: match verb forms to the subject, use correct prepositions, and break long sentences into clearer clauses.