Movies— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "Once in a month" yerine "once a month" demek daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak gereksiz tekrarları önleyin. Örneğin, sinema salonunun temiz olmamasıyla ilgili düşüncenizi daha açık ve düzgün bir şekilde ifade edin.

Ejemplo: I watch movies about once a month because I prefer not to go to the cinema. I find cinemas often dirty, and I'm not sure if the seats are clean.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla birleştirmelisiniz. "Most likely" ve "by the way" ifadeleri burada uygun değil. Ayrıca, favori filminizi tanıtırken daha açıklayıcı olun ve neden sevdiğinizi belirtin.

Ejemplo: I usually watch science fiction and thriller movies. My favorite movie is Conjugation 2 because it has an exciting plot and great special effects.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu ifadelerini azaltın. Bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın. Örneğin, "and by the way" yerine "also" veya "moreover" kullanabilirsiniz.

Ejemplo: I prefer watching movies at home because cinemas can be uncomfortable due to noisy people. Also, at home, I can eat whatever I want without being disturbed.

Sugerencia: Cümleniz dilbilgisi açısından hatalar içeriyor ve anlamı tam olarak ifade etmiyor. Daha basit ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin. Ayrıca, bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın.

Ejemplo: I think watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps you learn new vocabulary. I have been doing this since I was 16, and it has really improved my language skills.

× Actually I watch once in a month because I would like, I would like to not prefer to go cinema because it is very dirty and you cannot know the chairs are clean.

✓ Actually, I watch movies once a month because I don't prefer to go to the cinema since it is very dirty and you cannot be sure the chairs are clean.

The original sentence misuses the modal verb 'would like' and the phrase 'would like to not prefer' which is incorrect. Instead, use 'don't prefer' to express dislike or avoidance. Also, 'go cinema' is missing the preposition 'to'. The correction clarifies the modal verb usage and preposition.

× Actually I watch once in a month because I would like, I would like to not prefer to go cinema because it is very dirty and you cannot know the chairs are clean.

✓ Actually, I watch movies once a month because I don't prefer to go to the cinema since it is very dirty and you cannot be sure the chairs are clean.

The phrase 'go cinema' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go to the cinema' because 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before places.

× Actually, sorry I swallowing a gum.

✓ Actually, sorry, I am swallowing gum.

The original sentence uses 'I swallowing' which is incorrect. The correct form is the present continuous 'I am swallowing'. Also, 'a gum' is incorrect because 'gum' is uncountable in this context.

× Actually, sorry I swallowing a gum.

✓ Actually, sorry, I am swallowing gum.

'Gum' is an uncountable noun here and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. The correction removes 'a' to fix the singular/plural issue.

× I usually watch science fiction movies, sometimes thrilling movies.

✓ I usually watch science fiction movies and sometimes thrilling movies.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two parts properly. Adding 'and' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× I most likely and by the way, my favorite movie is Conjugation 2, and I can absolutely say that my significant favorite movie.

✓ Most likely, my favorite movie is Conjugation 2, and I can absolutely say that it is my favorite movie.

The phrase 'I most likely and by the way' is awkward and incorrect. Also, 'my significant favorite movie' is unclear. The correction removes unnecessary pronouns and clarifies the sentence.

× I prefer watching movies at home because I find going to cinema a bit uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer watching movies at home because I find going to the cinema a bit uncomfortable.

The phrase 'going to cinema' is missing the preposition 'the'. The correct phrase is 'going to the cinema'.

× Sometimes people talk loudly or make noises which it can be distracting.

✓ Sometimes people talk loudly or make noises, which can be distracting.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'which'. The relative pronoun 'which' already refers to the previous clause.

× So. And by the way, in addition, you can eat whatever you want in your home because you're watching at home and no one can disturb you or call you or something like that.

✓ Also, you can eat whatever you want at home because you're watching at home and no one can disturb you or call you or anything like that.

Starting sentences with 'So. And by the way, in addition,' is redundant and awkward. Using 'Also' is clearer and more appropriate. Additionally, 'in your home' is better as 'at home'.

× Also, you can eat whatever you want in your home because you're watching at home and no one can disturb you or call you or something like that.

✓ Also, you can eat whatever you want at home because you're watching at home and no one can disturb you or call you or something like that.

The correct preposition for being inside one's home is 'at home' rather than 'in your home' in this context.

× I think watching movies in other language it is very useful because it's help you acquire new vocabularies in movies and I doing since I was 16 and it is really enjoyed my language skills and I in addition you can do in a Netflix movies or which.

✓ I think watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps you acquire new vocabulary. I have been doing this since I was 16, and it has really improved my language skills. In addition, you can do this with Netflix movies or others.

Several preposition errors: 'in other language' should be 'in other languages'; 'help' should be 'helps' for subject-verb agreement; 'vocabularies' should be 'vocabulary' as it is uncountable; 'I doing' is incorrect, should be 'I have been doing'; 'it is really enjoyed' should be 'it has really improved'; 'in a Netflix movies or which' is unclear and corrected to 'with Netflix movies or others'.