Movies— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas. Misalnya, gunakan 'usually' daripada 'commonly', dan hindari frasa yang berulang seperti 'also' dua kali dalam kalimat yang sama.

Ejemplo: I usually watch movies on weekends and during my breaks, such as lunchtime. I enjoy having lunch while watching a movie.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata, seperti 'oftenly' yang salah, sebaiknya 'often'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan hindari pengulangan kata 'also'. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ejemplo: I often watch Korean dramas, action, horror, and romance movies. Actually, I prefer any genre as long as the film has good quality and an interesting story.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa, gunakan bentuk waktu yang tepat ('preferred' untuk masa lalu). Hindari pengulangan kata 'uh' dan lengkapi kalimat yang terputus agar jawaban lebih jelas dan lengkap.

Ejemplo: In the past, I preferred watching movies in the cinema because of the high-quality picture and sound. However, now I prefer watching movies at home because it is more comfortable and convenient.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari pengulangan kata 'also'.

Ejemplo: Watching movies in other languages is useful when learning a new language. For example, to improve my English skills and achieve a high IELTS band score, I usually watch English movies without subtitles.

× Oftenly I watch a Korean drama and also some actions movies, some horror movies and also romance.

✓ Often I watch Korean dramas and also some action movies, some horror movies and also romance.

The word 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'actions movies' should be 'action movies' as 'action' is an adjective here. 'Korean drama' should be plural 'Korean dramas' to match the context of watching multiple shows.

× Oftenly I watch a Korean drama and also some actions movies, some horror movies and also romance.

✓ Often I watch Korean dramas and also some action movies, some horror movies and also romance.

The singular 'a Korean drama' is inconsistent with the plural 'some action movies'. To maintain parallel structure, use plural 'Korean dramas'. Also, 'actions movies' should be 'action movies'.

× I commonly watch movies at the weekend currently and also in my rest time such as during lunch time.

✓ I commonly watch movies on the weekend currently and also in my free time such as during lunchtime.

The correct preposition for days or weekends is 'on', not 'at'. 'Rest time' is better expressed as 'free time'. 'Lunch time' is usually one word 'lunchtime'.

× I also like to have my lunch with some movies along with it.

✓ I also like to have my lunch while watching some movies.

The phrase 'with some movies along with it' is awkward and incorrect. Using 'while watching some movies' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× In the past, I prefer to watch the movies in cinema because the cinema offers a lot of quality, uh, such as a good quality of picture and sounds.

✓ In the past, I preferred to watch movies in the cinema because the cinema offered a lot of quality, such as good picture and sound quality.

Since the sentence refers to the past, the verbs should be in past tense: 'prefer' to 'preferred', 'offers' to 'offered'. Also, 'the movies' should be 'movies' and 'in cinema' should be 'in the cinema'.

× In the past, I prefer to watch the movies in cinema because the cinema offers a lot of quality, uh, such as a good quality of picture and sounds.

✓ In the past, I preferred to watch movies in the cinema because the cinema offered a lot of quality, such as good picture and sound quality.

Use 'the cinema' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'the movies' is unnecessary; 'movies' is sufficient.

× But right now I prefer to watch, uh, some movies at my home because the.

✓ But right now I prefer to watch some movies at home because it is more comfortable.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Completing the sentence with a reason improves clarity and sentence structure.

× It's actually useful when you are in the process of learning some language.

✓ It's actually useful when you are in the process of learning a language.

Use 'a language' instead of 'some language' because 'language' is countable here and 'some' is inappropriate.

× For example, when I'm learning language, in order to achieve a high IL score band uh usually watch movies in English and also I turn off the subtitles.

✓ For example, when I'm learning a language, in order to achieve a high IELTS band score, I usually watch movies in English and also turn off the subtitles.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'usually watch'. Also, 'learning language' should be 'learning a language'. 'IL score band' is likely 'IELTS band score'.