Movies— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容もやや冗長です。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。例えば、過去と現在の習慣を明確に区別し、理由を簡潔に述べると良いです。

Ejemplo: I watch movies at home these days, but I used to go to the cinema often in the past. I enjoy watching movies in the cinema, but now I find it hard to sit through a whole film there.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が少し不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。具体的なジャンル名を正確に使い、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。また、文を簡潔にまとめ、論理的なつながりを持たせましょう。

Ejemplo: I usually watch romantic and documentary movies because I don't like horror films; they scare me and make me feel uneasy afterwards.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現が多いです。より自然で簡潔な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることを心がけましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer watching movies at home because it's more comfortable. I can relax by sitting or lying down, which is not possible in a cinema.

Sugerencia: 回答は概ね良いですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあります。より自然な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I think watching movies in other languages is useful for English learners because it helps us hear authentic pronunciation and learn about cultural differences.

× I sit and watch movie these days, but many years ago I used to go out for movies so often.

✓ I sit and watch movies these days, but many years ago I used to go out for movies so often.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to watching movies in general, which is a countable noun and requires the plural form when talking about more than one.

× I like watching movies in cinema, but now I couldn't end up, I couldn't stand stay sitting in the movie.

✓ I like watching movies in the cinema, but now I can't stand staying seated in the movie.

The phrase 'in cinema' requires the definite article 'the' to become 'in the cinema'. Also, 'couldn't end up' is incorrect here; 'can't stand staying seated' is more appropriate. 'Stay sitting' is awkward; 'staying seated' is better.

× I watch movies like love story, human is human is story and non fiction movies because I'm not good at watching horrifying movies which makes me frightened and after I finished.

✓ I watch movies like love stories, human stories, and non-fiction movies because I'm not good at watching horror movies which frighten me, especially after I finish.

The nouns 'love story' and 'human is human is story' are incorrect and should be pluralized and corrected to 'love stories' and 'human stories'. 'Horrifying movies' is better expressed as 'horror movies'. Also, 'which makes me frightened and after I finished' is awkward; 'which frighten me, especially after I finish' is clearer.

× I like watching movies at home because it's, it is more comfortable to watch movies than watching in cinema.

✓ I like watching movies at home because it is more comfortable to watch movies than watching in the cinema.

Again, 'in cinema' requires the definite article 'the' to become 'in the cinema'.

× I can relax, I can feel relaxed and uh, I can sit around or lie down or whatever. I whatever.

✓ I can relax, I can feel relaxed, and I can sit around or lie down or whatever.

The repeated phrase 'I whatever' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing it improves clarity and correctness.

× I think it is useful for English learners to watch English movies because we can find we can listen to real pronunciation and we can learn about culture difference.

✓ I think it is useful for English learners to watch English movies because we can listen to real pronunciation and learn about cultural differences.

The phrase 'we can find we can listen' is redundant; 'we can listen' suffices. 'Culture difference' should be pluralized and adjectivized to 'cultural differences'.