E-books— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words effectively to connect your points.

Ejemplo: I prefer e-books over paper books because they are lightweight and easy to carry around. In contrast, paper books can be heavy and inconvenient to transport, especially when traveling.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words. Try to organize your ideas more logically and use linking words to clarify your points. Avoid unnecessary hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'.

Ejemplo: I usually read online when I travel because I prefer to carry a single device like my smartphone. This way, I can easily access books without carrying multiple paper books, which is very convenient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and filler words. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I will read more online in the future because smartphones, tablets, and PCs make it easy to access a wide range of books. Moreover, reading online provides valuable knowledge and is a relaxing activity.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: I usually read comic books online, especially 'One Piece,' which is a long-running series. Buying physical copies can be heavy and expensive, so reading online is much more convenient for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the main point but contains repetition and filler words. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: The biggest difference between online and paper books is accessibility. Online books allow us to access a wide variety of materials, from comics to specialized medical books, which is not always possible with paper books.

× And also in addition, paper books is really heavy, uh, so it's really uncomfortable to put in my buck.

✓ And also in addition, paper books are really heavy, uh, so it's really uncomfortable to put in my bag.

The subject 'paper books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Also, 'buck' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'bag'.

× so it's really uncomfortable to put in my buck.

✓ so it's really uncomfortable to put in my bag.

The word 'buck' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition and noun phrase is 'put in my bag' to indicate placing something inside a container.

× So I want to the single devices, uh, so I can read my, I can read books on the smartphone, which is really useful for me in trouble.

✓ So I want a single device, uh, so I can read books on the smartphone, which is really useful for me when I'm in trouble.

The original sentence has structural issues and unclear phrasing. 'Want to the single devices' is incorrect; it should be 'want a single device'. Also, 'which is really useful for me in trouble' is unclear; 'when I'm in trouble' clarifies the meaning.

× which is really useful for me in trouble.

✓ which is really useful for me when I'm in trouble.

The phrase 'in trouble' needs a preceding clause like 'when I'm' to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× it's really easy to read, uh, some books on online and uh, which each which provides us a lot of knowledge from knowledge and information.

✓ it's really easy to read, uh, some books online, which provides us with a lot of knowledge and information.

The phrase 'on online' is incorrect; 'online' does not require a preposition here. Also, 'which each which provides us a lot of knowledge from knowledge and information' is redundant and awkward; it should be 'which provides us with a lot of knowledge and information.'

× I usually lead comics book online, especially in one piece, which is really long series, uh, uh, along for 10 years or something.

✓ I usually read comic books online, especially One Piece, which is a really long series, uh, uh, ongoing for 10 years or something.

'Lead' should be 'read'. 'Comics book' should be plural 'comic books'. 'One Piece' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. 'Along for 10 years' should be 'ongoing for 10 years' to express duration.

× The biggest big the biggest big difference between online books and paper books is the accessibility. On the online books, we can access a wide variety of the books, including comics, from comics to specific, uh, medical books.

✓ The biggest difference between online books and paper books is accessibility. With online books, we can access a wide variety of books, including comics, from comics to specific, uh, medical books.

'On the online books' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with online books'. Also, 'the biggest big the biggest big' is redundant; only one 'biggest' is needed.