Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using linking words to improve flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because I have a keen interest in the subject. It teaches me about the human body and how it functions. Moreover, it provides information about the life cycles of animals and plants, which I find fascinating.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more structured and avoid unclear phrases like 'Like Barnes and animals.' Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your points.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I use my science knowledge daily because it relates to the human body and nature. For example, understanding how animals and plants function helps me appreciate the world around us. Science is a fascinating subject that provides useful knowledge for everyday life.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and complete sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words to make your answer coherent and informative.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I would like to learn more about biology because I am interested in understanding living organisms. For example, I am fascinated by how plants and animals adapt to their environment, and I want to gain more knowledge about ecosystems.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with clear, relevant points. Use linking words and specific examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand our ecosystem and nature. Additionally, science teaches us about the human body and how it functions, which is essential for our health and well-being.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you enjoy science programs, making your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I like watching science TV programs because they are interesting and informative. They help me understand complex topics in an easy and engaging way, especially subjects related to nature.

× Yes, I enjoyed studying.

✓ Yes, I enjoy studying.

The question is in present tense asking about current enjoyment, so the answer should also be in present tense 'enjoy' instead of past tense 'enjoyed'.

× Signs at the school becaused.

✓ Science at school because I have a keen interest in the subject.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. It seems to be a fragment and contains a non-word 'becaused'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and forms a complete sentence.

× I have keen interest in science subject.

✓ I have a keen interest in the science subject.

The phrase 'keen interest' requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'science subject' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the subject.

× It. It gives knowledge about body parts and teach us how the human body works.

✓ It gives knowledge about body parts and teaches us how the human body works.

The sentence is fragmented with 'It.' repeated. Also, subject-verb agreement error with 'teach' instead of 'teaches'. The correction combines the ideas into one sentence and corrects the verb form.

× Moreover, it still gives information regarding life cycle of animals and plants.

✓ Moreover, it still gives information regarding the life cycle of animals and plants.

The phrase 'life cycle' requires the definite article 'the' before it to specify the particular life cycle.

× Like Barnes and animals.

✓ Like humans and animals.

'Barnes' is likely a misspelling of 'humans'. Correcting to 'humans' makes the sentence meaningful.

× It is very fascinating subject that gives me useful knowledge about the world around us.

✓ It is a very fascinating subject that gives me useful knowledge about the world around us.

The phrase 'very fascinating subject' requires the article 'a' before 'very' to be grammatically correct.

× Definitely I would like to learn more about biological becaused I have took in interest in understanding the living organisms.

✓ Definitely, I would like to learn more about biology because I have taken an interest in understanding living organisms.

'Biological' is an adjective; the noun 'biology' is needed here. 'Becaused' is incorrect; 'because' is correct. 'Have took' is incorrect; the present perfect form is 'have taken'. Also, 'an interest' requires the article 'an'.

× For example, am fascinated by how plants and animals adapt their environment and I want to gain more knowledge about.

✓ For example, I am fascinated by how plants and animals adapt to their environment, and I want to gain more knowledge about it.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' and the preposition 'to' after 'adapt'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs 'it' to complete the thought.

× The ecosystem.

✓ The ecosystem.

This fragment is incomplete as a sentence. It should be connected to the previous sentence or expanded to form a complete sentence.

× Friends playing Spiderman 10 Quintessential role in everybody's lives.

✓ Science plays a quintessential role in everybody's lives.

The original sentence is nonsensical and contains unrelated words. The correction assumes the intended meaning is about science's importance.

× The cause.

✓ Because it is related to our ecosystem and our nature.

'The cause.' is a fragment and unclear. The correction provides a complete explanation.

× Moreover, it gives knowledge about our human body parts and it also gives knowledge or information about how our body works.

✓ Moreover, it gives knowledge about our human body parts and also provides information about how our body works.

Repetition of 'gives knowledge' is awkward; 'provides information' is more natural. Also, 'knowledge or information' is redundant.

× So it is my shield.

✓ So it is my shield.

This sentence is metaphorical but grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Definitely I like watching science degree programs becaused it is very interesting and it is well useful also because it gives knowledge at proper manner.

✓ Definitely, I like watching science programs because they are very interesting and useful, as they provide knowledge in a proper manner.

'Science degree programs' is likely incorrect; 'science programs' is better. 'Becaused' is incorrect; 'because' is correct. 'Well useful' is incorrect; 'useful' suffices. 'Gives knowledge at proper manner' is awkward; 'provide knowledge in a proper manner' is better.

× In addition to this they helped me to understand complex topics in easy way and interesting weighed like nature.

✓ In addition to this, they help me understand complex topics in an easy and interesting way, like nature.

'Helped' should be present tense 'help' to match context. 'Easy way' needs article 'an'. 'Interesting weighed' is incorrect; 'interesting way' is correct.