Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用存在较多错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言描述感受。

Ejemplo: I did not enjoy studying science at school because I found it difficult to understand the many formulas and equations.

Sugerencia: 回答内容模糊且不连贯，缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题，并举例说明日常生活中是否使用科学知识。

Ejemplo: I don't use my science knowledge every day, but sometimes I apply it when cooking or fixing things at home.

Sugerencia: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达想法，并具体说明为什么对药学感兴趣。

Ejemplo: I would like to learn more about pharmacy because it is useful for understanding medicines and helping my family stay healthy.

Sugerencia: 回答有一定逻辑，但表达不够流畅，句子不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，清楚表达观点并举例说明。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is important for everyone to study basic science because it helps us understand the world and solve everyday problems.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整且表达混乱。建议直接表达喜欢或不喜欢，并说明原因，使用完整句子。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like watching science TV programs because I find them boring, especially documentaries.

× Oh, when I was a teenager, I started in middle school.

✓ Oh, when I was a teenager, I started middle school.

动词start后不需要介词in，直接加名词作宾语。这里的错误是多余使用了介词in。

× I think that science is where it was very difficult for me to study because they have manning the there were many formulations and a lot of a lot of equal. Need to learn?

✓ I think that science was very difficult for me to study because there were many formulas and a lot of equations I needed to learn.

句子结构混乱，存在多余词汇和语序错误。应简化句子，去掉无意义词汇，调整语序使句子通顺。

× because they have manning the there were many formulations and a lot of a lot of equal.

✓ because there were many formulas and a lot of equations.

错误使用了代词they，实际应使用there be结构表达存在。

× Oh, actually we don't use this science knowledge, especially when.

✓ Oh, actually we don't use this science knowledge, especially when...

句子未完成，缺少后续内容，导致表达不完整。

× I just to commute from the home and office and my daily routine.

✓ I just commute between home and office in my daily routine.

动词commute后应使用介词between表示“在……之间”，且不需要冠词the。

× But if I need to say maybe some interest mouse, some special occasion will use this science knowledge, I'm not sure.

✓ But if I need to say, maybe on some special occasions I will use this science knowledge, I'm not sure.

句子结构混乱，词汇错误（interest mouse无意义），应调整为正确表达。

× If I need to say I would like to choose.

✓ If I need to say, I would like to choose.

缺少逗号分隔条件状语和主句，影响句子流畅。

× I can use that when I fear not fear sick or not good and I can help others like my family into.

✓ I can use that when I am sick or not feeling well, and I can help others like my family too.

错误使用fear代替feel，句子不完整且代词使用错误。

× I think have a basic sign.

✓ I think having basic science knowledge is important.

单复数错误，sign应为science，且句子不完整。

× I think having a basic science knowledge is important for every individuals because they can.

✓ I think having basic science knowledge is important for every individual because they can.

every后应接单数名词individual，且a basic science knowledge中knowledge不可数，不用冠词a。

× They can understand what happened in the what happened and why this happened in the society in specially in their daily life.

✓ They can understand what happened and why it happened in society, especially in their daily life.

句子重复且结构混乱，应简化并调整语序。

× Some basic science can.

✓ Some basic science knowledge can help.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词。

× And no, even I think the science is basically is a basic ability for individuals, but I.

✓ No, even though I think science is basically a basic ability for individuals, I...

错误使用连词and开头，且句子不完整。

× I can't all right with the boring of science movies of science on TV grounds, especially the documentaries.

✓ I can't get along with the boring science movies on TV, especially documentaries.

错误使用短语，表达不清晰，需调整为正确搭配。

× I prefer to choose more. It's.

✓ I prefer to choose other programs.

句子不完整且表达不清，应补充完整。