Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy studying science because I have always been curious about how the world works. Studying subjects like physics, chemistry, and maths has given me a solid understanding of natural phenomena.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and be more specific about how you apply science daily. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I apply my science knowledge daily, especially biology, when planning my diet to maintain good health. Additionally, I use electronic devices, which involve principles of physics and technology.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid vague phrases like 'increase my industrial levels' and focus on clear reasons why you like chemistry. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammatical errors.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to learn more about chemistry because it helps me understand how substances interact, which fascinates me. It was also one of my favourite subjects during school, and I performed well in it.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion directly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand how the world and our bodies function. This knowledge can guide us in making better decisions in daily life.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains many repetitions and grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear and complete response, avoid repeating words, and use correct sentence structures. Also, clarify how these programs benefit you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs such as those on the Discovery Channel. I have also watched the Netflix series 'Stranger Things,' which fascinates me and improves my understanding of science fiction concepts.

× Yes, of course, as I have completed my higher studies with science subjects like physics, chemistry and maths from my childhood.

✓ Yes, of course, as I completed my higher studies with science subjects like physics, chemistry and maths from my childhood.

The use of present perfect 'have completed' is incorrect here because the action is completed in the past and is linked to a specific time ('from my childhood'). Simple past 'completed' is appropriate.

× I love to learn science as I am very I was very curious about how the world works, so after studying science I have got a basic knowledge of that.

✓ I love to learn science as I was very curious about how the world works, so after studying science I have gained a basic knowledge of it.

The sentence has mixed tenses and repetition ('I am very I was very'). Correcting to past tense 'was' for curiosity and using 'have gained' for present perfect to indicate the result of studying science improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I use my science knowledge often in my daily use daily routine as whenever I eat something which is not related to my health issues.

✓ Yes, I often use my science knowledge in my daily routine, especially whenever I eat something that is not related to my health issues.

The phrase 'in my daily use daily routine' is redundant and incorrect. 'In my daily routine' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'which' should be 'that' for defining clauses.

× So I use my biology knowledge which is very basic and I used to make some diet plans for me which will help me to enhance my body structure and I also use some electronic devices.

✓ So I use my basic biology knowledge and make some diet plans for myself which help me enhance my body structure, and I also use some electronic devices.

'Used to make' implies past habit, but the context is present. 'Make' fits better. 'Help me to enhance' is better as 'help me enhance'. 'For me' should be 'for myself' for reflexive pronoun correctness.

× Yes, if I get a chance to study some particular subject so I would I would definitely choose chemistry because it enhances my mood levels and it just increase my industrial levels and it was my one of my favorite subject from the childhood as I have scored much in my CBSE.

✓ Yes, if I get a chance to study a particular subject, I would definitely choose chemistry because it enhances my mood levels and increases my industrial knowledge. It was one of my favorite subjects from childhood as I scored well in my CBSE exams.

The sentence has repeated 'I would'. 'So' is unnecessary after 'subject'. 'Increase' should be 'increases' to agree with singular subject. 'One of my favorite subject' should be 'one of my favorite subjects'. 'Scored much' is incorrect; 'scored well' is appropriate.

× According to me, studying science is a crucial aspect among every commoners.

✓ According to me, studying science is a crucial aspect for every common person.

'Among every commoners' is incorrect. 'Among' is used for groups, and 'every' requires singular noun. Correct phrase is 'for every common person'.

× So by studying science we will get we can get a lot of knowledge about how the world works and how even our body works by functionally and significantly so by studying science it makes a clearer and wider path to the particular.

✓ By studying science, we can gain a lot of knowledge about how the world works and how our body functions. Studying science creates a clearer and wider path to understanding these aspects.

The sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'We will get we can get' is redundant. 'Our body works by functionally and significantly' is incorrect; 'our body functions' is better. The last part is incomplete and unclear; rephrased for clarity.

× Yes, of course I like various science TV programs like I I just watched I have watched Discovery Channel on the TV and I have already watched some Netflix series, mainly the stranger things.

✓ Yes, of course, I like various science TV programs. I have watched the Discovery Channel on TV and some Netflix series, mainly Stranger Things.

Repeated 'I' is an error. 'The stranger things' should be 'Stranger Things' as a proper noun without 'the'. Also, 'I just watched I have watched' is redundant; 'I have watched' suffices.

× It's have it have 5 Series and I have watched all the episodes.

✓ It has 5 series and I have watched all the episodes.

'It's have it have' is incorrect. The correct form is 'It has'. 'Series' is plural but can be used as singular for a show with multiple seasons.

× It fascinating me it fascinates me and it also improve my.

✓ It fascinates me and it also improves me.

'It fascinating me' is incorrect; correct verb form is 'It fascinates me'. 'Improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as per given text.