Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや表現の不明瞭さがあります。例えば、「makes our perspective much wider than before」は「broadens our perspective」の方が自然です。また、例の説明がやや曖昧なので、具体的な科学者の名前や発見を挙げると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy studying science because it broadens my perspective. For example, learning about Marie Curie's discoveries and her dedication helps me appreciate the importance of scientific research in understanding the world.

Sugerencia: 回答に多くのためらいの言葉（umm, uh）が含まれており、流暢さが低下しています。また、具体的な科学の原理についての説明が不足しています。調理に関する科学的原理（例えば、熱伝導や化学変化）を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I use science knowledge daily, especially when cooking. For example, when boiling eggs, I understand how heat causes the proteins to coagulate, which helps me cook them perfectly.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「because when I was a child I liked watching sci-fi movies such as ET or Steroids」は一文にまとめるか、接続詞を使って明確にすると良いです。また、「Steroids」はおそらく「Star Wars」の誤りと思われます。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to learn more about space exploration because I have loved sci-fi movies like ET and Star Wars since I was a child. My dream is to travel to outer space, so I want to gain more knowledge about it.

Sugerencia: 回答は意見を述べていますが、最後の文「I think they should learn」が曖昧で、何を学ぶべきか明確ではありません。より明確に「それぞれの興味に応じて学ぶべきだ」と表現すると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: No, I don't think everyone needs to study science because some people are more interested and skilled in arts or social studies. I believe people should focus on subjects they are passionate about.

Sugerencia: 回答は意味がやや不明瞭で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「I can't understand how to illustrate the stories of scientists and complicated principles effectively」は「I like watching science programs because they help me understand complex scientific concepts better」のように言い換えると自然です。また、「installation of science and technology」は不適切な表現です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs because they help me understand complex scientific concepts more clearly. As a journalist, learning different ways to explain science and technology inspires me in my work.

× Yes, I prefer studying science because it makes our perspective much wider than before.

✓ Yes, I prefer studying science because it broadens our perspective much more than before.

The phrase 'makes our perspective much wider' is awkward; 'broadens our perspective' is a more natural collocation in English. This is a usage issue related to verb forms and collocations.

× For example, understanding the principles and the brave stories of the scientists makes me understand what is important to understand the world.

✓ For example, understanding the principles and the brave stories of scientists helps me understand what is important to comprehend the world.

The verb 'makes me understand' is grammatically correct but 'helps me understand' is more natural here. Also, 'the scientists' should be 'scientists' as a general group. This relates to article usage and verb choice.

× We need a lot of principles and basics of science.

✓ We need a lot of principles and basic knowledge of science.

'Basics' is plural but 'basic knowledge' is more appropriate here. Also, 'a lot of principles' is acceptable but 'basic knowledge' is a better collocation. This is a singular/plural and word choice issue.

× Yes, I want to gain a lot of knowledge about space exploration and because when I was a child I liked watching sci-fi movies such as ET or Steroids, and my absolute dream is go to the outer space and I want to get information about that.

✓ Yes, I want to gain a lot of knowledge about space exploration because when I was a child I liked watching sci-fi movies such as ET or Star Wars, and my absolute dream is to go to outer space and I want to get information about that.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'and because' is redundant, 'Steroids' is likely a mishearing of 'Star Wars', 'is go' should be 'is to go', and 'the outer space' should be 'outer space' without 'the'. These are issues of conjunction use, article use, and infinitive form.

× Yes, I want to gain a lot of knowledge about space exploration and because when I was a child I liked watching sci-fi movies such as ET or Steroids, and my absolute dream is go to the outer space and I want to get information about that.

✓ Yes, I want to gain a lot of knowledge about space exploration because when I was a child I liked watching sci-fi movies such as ET or Star Wars, and my absolute dream is to go to outer space and I want to get information about that.

The phrase 'and because' is incorrect; 'because' alone should be used to introduce the reason. This is an incorrect conjunction use.

× my absolute dream is go to the outer space

✓ my absolute dream is to go to outer space

'The outer space' is incorrect; 'outer space' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'is go' should be 'is to go' to form the infinitive. This is an article error and verb form error.

× I usually use uh, science knowledge, uh, in my daily life, for example, when I have to cook eggs.

✓ I usually use science knowledge in my daily life, for example, when I have to cook eggs.

The filler words 'uh' should be omitted in formal speech. This is not a grammar error but improves clarity and fluency.

× I think learning science is not necessarily important for many people because some people prefer and are good at learning arts or social studies. I think they should learn.

✓ I think learning science is not necessarily important for many people because some people prefer and are good at learning arts or social studies. I think they should learn those subjects.

The pronoun 'they' is vague; specifying 'those subjects' clarifies the meaning. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× Yes, I prefer watching TV science programs because I can't understand how to illustrate the stories of scientists and complicated principles effectively.

✓ Yes, I prefer watching science TV programs because I can't understand how to illustrate the stories of scientists and complicated principles effectively.

The phrase 'TV science programs' is more natural than 'science TV programs'. However, the original sentence is acceptable; this is a minor stylistic preference.

× As a journalist, I have to gain a lot of methods for the installation of science and technology, which inspires me.

✓ As a journalist, I have to learn many methods for the application of science and technology, which inspires me.

'Gain methods for the installation of science and technology' is awkward and incorrect. 'Learn methods for the application of science and technology' is more natural. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word choice.