Science— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence flow. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your response within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I didn't enjoy studying science at school, particularly in junior and high school, because focusing on just one correct answer felt boring. However, I loved doing experiments and observing animals in nature, which made science more interesting for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is informative but a bit wordy and could be clearer. Use linking words to improve coherence and try to avoid repeating 'science' multiple times. Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I use a lot of scientific knowledge daily because I am a journalist covering topics like climate change and environmental issues. Therefore, I often visit research institutions to gather accurate information about technology, biology, and geology.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and personal, but it could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar points. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to learn more about space exploration and rocket science because I have always been fascinated by science fiction movies like ET and Star Wars. As a child, I enjoyed hearing stories about new planets, which sparked my interest in this subject.

Sugerencia: Your answer presents a clear opinion but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, clarify your reasoning with specific examples or explanations to make your argument stronger.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, not everyone needs to study biology, physics, or chemistry in depth because practical application of scientific knowledge is more important. Therefore, I believe social studies play a more vital role for most people.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words for coherence and be more precise with vocabulary. Also, correct minor mistakes to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs because they provide useful information about topics like climate change and environmental issues. For instance, I recently watched a BBC documentary about turtle conservation, which I found very inspiring.

× I have to use much science knowledge because I am a journalist mainly covering science such as climate change or environmental issues, which requires a lot of knowledge about science such as technology, biology or geology.

✓ I have to use a lot of scientific knowledge because I am a journalist mainly covering science such as climate change or environmental issues, which requires a lot of knowledge about science such as technology, biology or geology.

The phrase 'much science knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should be quantified with 'a lot of' instead of 'much' in affirmative sentences. Also, 'science knowledge' is better expressed as 'scientific knowledge' for natural adjective use.

× So I always go to the research institution.

✓ So I always go to research institutions.

The phrase 'the research institution' implies a specific institution, but the context suggests a general statement. Also, 'research institutions' is plural to indicate multiple places. The preposition 'to' is correct, but the article 'the' is unnecessary here.

× When I was a child, I loved listening to their stories about the new planets.

✓ When I was a child, I loved listening to stories about new planets.

The pronoun 'their' is unclear and incorrect here because it does not have a clear antecedent. Removing 'their' clarifies the sentence and avoids confusion.

× because how to use such natural science knowledge is more important in practical.

✓ because how to use such natural science knowledge is more important in practice.

The phrase 'in practical' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in practice' when referring to practical application or use.

× Yes, I prefer watching TV science programs because I can gain a lot of information about how to explain climate change or environment issues well.

✓ Yes, I prefer watching science TV programs because I can gain a lot of information about how to explain climate change or environmental issues well.

The phrase 'TV science programs' is awkward; 'science TV programs' is more natural. Also, 'environment issues' should be 'environmental issues' because 'environmental' is the correct adjective form.

× For example, recently I watched the BBCS documents about how to preserve turtles to form their extinction and that was quite inspiring.

✓ For example, recently I watched BBC documentaries about how to prevent turtles from extinction and that was quite inspiring.

'BBCS documents' is incorrect; it should be 'BBC documentaries'. Also, 'preserve turtles to form their extinction' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prevent turtles from extinction'. The plural 'documents' is better as 'documentaries' for TV programs.