Internet— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: I started using the internet when I was a senior at university because I needed it to complete my assignments.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác và hơi lủng củng. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about two hours online every day, mainly browsing Facebook and Instagram because they provide both information and entertainment after a long day of work.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was in high school, my parents didn't allow me to use the internet because they wanted me to focus on studying without distractions from social media.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng cấu trúc câu dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, about two hours a day. I want to reduce this and spend more quality time with my family.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Without the internet, I would spend more time with my family and friends. For example, I often cook meals with my family and meet friends for coffee.

× Actually where their first time I started to using my at the Internet was I was the senior you sitting in at university Ann Yeah, because I want to, I need to use my Internet for my my task at my unit.

✓ Actually, the first time I started using the Internet was when I was a senior sitting at university. Yeah, because I wanted to use the Internet for my tasks at my unit.

The phrase 'started to using' is incorrect; after 'start', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. Also, 'want to' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match the past context. The sentence structure was confusing and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× Actually where their first time I started to using my at the Internet was I was the senior you sitting in at university Ann Yeah, because I want to, I need to use my Internet for my my task at my unit.

✓ Actually, the first time I started using the Internet was when I was a senior sitting at university. Yeah, because I wanted to use the Internet for my tasks at my unit.

The pronouns 'their' and 'you' were incorrectly used. 'Their' should be 'the' and 'you' should be omitted or replaced with 'I' to correctly refer to the speaker.

× Earl I well, I often spent well about two hours of Ford surfing the Internet, especially the Facebook or Instagram, because this social media has a lot of information and entertainment that I can get out to the long working.

✓ Well, I often spend about two hours surfing the Internet, especially Facebook or Instagram, because social media has a lot of information and entertainment that I can get after a long day of work.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the sentence talks about a habitual action, so present tense 'spend' is correct. Also, 'the Facebook or Instagram' should be 'Facebook or Instagram' without 'the'. The phrase 'get out to the long working' is unclear and corrected to 'get after a long day of work' for clarity.

× Actually in in the high school, I was prohibited using the Internet by my parents because, UM, my parents one to two want wanted me to focus on my studying and not be distracted by any other factor on a social media.

✓ Actually, in high school, I was prohibited from using the Internet by my parents because they wanted me to focus on my studies and not be distracted by social media.

The phrase 'prohibited using' should be 'prohibited from using'. 'One to two want wanted' is incorrect and corrected to 'they wanted'. 'My studying' is better expressed as 'my studies'. 'On a social media' should be 'by social media'.

× Yes, of course I often as I mentioned above, I often spend 2 hours per day to use the Internet. So I think this the amount of time was quite long and I need to cut down on the time when I was online and to spend more time with my family.

✓ Yes, of course. As I mentioned above, I often spend 2 hours per day using the Internet. So I think this amount of time is quite long and I need to cut down on the time I spend online and spend more time with my family.

The phrase 'spend 2 hours per day to use' should be 'spend 2 hours per day using'. 'The amount of time was' should be 'the amount of time is' to match present tense. 'When I was online' should be 'I spend online' to express habitual action.

× Well, this is quite ensuring crashing with the Internet. I would like to spend more time with my family and my friends. I with my family I often 1010 T cooking meal with them and with my friends I will have a coffee meeting.

✓ Well, this is quite uncertain without the Internet. I would like to spend more time with my family and my friends. With my family, I often cook meals with them, and with my friends, I will have coffee meetings.

The phrase 'ensuring crashing with the Internet' is unclear and corrected to 'uncertain without the Internet'. 'I with my family I often 1010 T cooking meal' is incorrect and corrected to 'With my family, I often cook meals'. 'Have a coffee meeting' is better expressed as 'have coffee meetings'.