Part 1
Examinador
What languages can you speak?
Candidato
Now I can speak three kinds of language, which is Chinese, English and French. And I, I, I learned, I have learned a speaking English for almost, uh, almost 20 years. And I and I.
Examinador
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidato
Yes, I think it's very difficult to learn a new language because we have different logic about speaking language such as French. If you want to speak the nighty night in French, sugar say 90 + 9 and uh, your will make a.
Examinador
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidato
Yes, I'm, I'm really interested in learning other languages and I hope that I will learn about Japanese or Korean and Germany. And I also prepared for a study aboard and, uh, if I go to the germ.
Examinador
Why do you learn English?
Candidato
First of all, I think learning English is a composer equals to Chinese or Chinese students. And secondly, I think it's a, it's a, it's a practical, practical skill to communicate with foreigners with.
What languages can you speak?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答时语言表达不够流畅,有重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免重复,并注意语法正确。
Ejemplo: I can speak three languages: Chinese, English, and French. I have been learning English for almost 20 years.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,缺乏具体细节。建议回答时条理清楚,使用连贯的句子,并举具体例子说明。
Ejemplo: Yes, learning a new language is difficult because different languages have different structures. For example, in French, numbers are combined in a unique way, which can be confusing.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整。建议使用完整句子表达兴趣和计划,并注意语法准确。
Ejemplo: Yes, I am interested in learning other languages like Japanese, Korean, and German. I am also preparing to study abroad, which will help me improve my language skills.
Why do you learn English?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答不够清晰,表达重复且语法错误较多。建议明确表达学习英语的原因,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。
Ejemplo: I learn English because it is an important language for communication worldwide. It helps me connect with people from different countries and is useful for my studies and career.
× Now I can speak three kinds of language, which is Chinese, English and French.
✓ Now I can speak three kinds of languages, which are Chinese, English and French.
这里的“kinds of language”应使用复数形式“languages”,因为表示多种语言。谓语动词也应与复数主语一致,使用“are”。
× I have learned a speaking English for almost, uh, almost 20 years.
✓ I have learned to speak English for almost 20 years.
“learned a speaking English”结构不正确,动词“learn”后应接不定式“to speak”表示学习做某事。
× I also prepared for a study aboard and, uh, if I go to the germ.
✓ I also prepared to study abroad and, uh, if I go to Germany.
“prepared for a study aboard”应改为“prepared to study abroad”,表示准备去国外学习。“germ”应为“Germany”,是国家名。
× I hope that I will learn about Japanese or Korean and Germany.
✓ I hope that I will learn Japanese or Korean and German.
“Japanese”与“Korean”是语言或国籍形容词,不加“about”。“Germany”是国家名,形容词应为“German”。
× I think learning English is a composer equals to Chinese or Chinese students.
✓ I think learning English is comparable to Chinese for Chinese students.
“composer equals to”用法错误,应使用“comparable to”表示“可比较的”。
× I think it's a, it's a, it's a practical, practical skill to communicate with foreigners with.
✓ I think it's a practical skill to communicate with foreigners.
句尾多余的“with”应删除,且“practical”重复使用不当,保留一次即可。