Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words. For example, say "I can speak three languages. Nepali is my mother tongue, and I learned English during my school days and by watching TV programs."

Ejemplo: I can speak three languages. Nepali is my mother tongue, and I learned English during my school days and by watching TV programs. Additionally, I can speak Hindi because of my interest in Indian culture.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has many errors. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. For example, "Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it has different sounds and writing styles that are hard to remember."

Ejemplo: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it has different sounds and writing styles that are hard to remember. Moreover, it requires regular practice to become fluent.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasons. For example, "Yes, I want to learn Japanese in the future because I find it fascinating and I admire how fluently people speak it."

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn Japanese in the future because I find it fascinating. Also, I admire how fluently people speak it, and I think it will help me understand their culture better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive. Try to make it more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I learn English for my future career because it is an international language spoken worldwide. Without English, many jobs cannot be done, so it is very important today."

Ejemplo: I learn English for my future career because it is an international language spoken worldwide. Without English, many jobs cannot be done, so it is very important today.

× I speak in the end.

✓ I speak in the end.

This sentence is unclear and seems incomplete, but it does not contain a specific grammar mistake listed in the problem types. No correction is made.

× English beside of Nepali I learned in D from the TV programs and I learned English during my school days.

✓ English besides Nepali, I learned from TV programs and during my school days.

The phrase 'beside of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'besides' to mean 'in addition to'. Also, 'in D' is unclear and likely a mistake, so it is omitted for clarity.

× learning or different languages languages are quite difficult tasks as it contains different fluency and S and in earth and also it has a different writing style which is quite difficult to memorize.

✓ learning different languages is quite a difficult task as they have different fluency and pronunciation and also different writing styles which are quite difficult to memorize.

The sentence has plural and singular mismatches: 'languages languages' is redundant; 'languages are' should be followed by plural verbs and pronouns. 'It contains' should be 'they have' to agree with plural 'languages'.

× So learning different languages or difficult tasks.

✓ So learning different languages is a difficult task.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'is' and correcting 'or' to 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I'm quite impressed by the Japanese language is so I'm willing to learn Japanese language in my future at is as it is quite fascinating and I love the fluency that they speak in.

✓ I'm quite impressed by the Japanese language, so I'm willing to learn it in the future as it is quite fascinating and I love the fluency with which they speak.

The original sentence incorrectly combines clauses without proper conjunctions and has awkward phrasing. Adding commas and conjunctions and rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× I learned English for my future career.

✓ I am learning English for my future career.

The tense should match the ongoing action; 'learned' (past tense) is incorrect if the learning is current. Also, 'the' before 'future career' is unnecessary here.

× As in, as we know that English is international language that is spoken worldwide and without English none of the work can be done.

✓ As we know, English is an international language that is spoken worldwide, and without English, none of the work can be done.

The phrase 'English is international language' lacks the indefinite article 'an'. Also, commas improve sentence flow.

× That is why I think English is a very much important language in today's world.

✓ That is why I think English is a very important language in today's world.

The phrase 'very much important' is incorrect; 'very important' is the correct form to intensify the adjective.