Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I can speak two languages: Vietnamese and English. I also watch Korean dramas, so I have learned some Korean words and can speak a little Korean.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult. For example, English is very different from my native language, so it takes a lot of time and effort to study it.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do cụ thể. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: In the future, I want to learn Korean because I really enjoy watching Korean dramas. I also want to learn French because I love the culture and hope to visit France one day.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.

Ejemplo: I learn English because it helps me communicate with many friends and improves my knowledge. Also, English will open more job opportunities for me in the future.

× I can speak two language is Vietnamese and English ends.

✓ I can speak two languages: Vietnamese and English.

The noun 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to more than one language. Also, 'ends' is incorrect and unnecessary here. Use a colon to list the languages.

× I am offensive K drama.

✓ I am fond of K drama.

The phrase 'offensive K drama' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'fond of' to express liking something.

× So when I watch film K drama, I'll have to I have to learn many many works, many, many words of K dramas.

✓ So when I watch K drama films, I have to learn many words from them.

The sentence is awkward and repetitive. 'Works' is incorrect; 'words' is appropriate. Also, 'I'll have to I have to' is redundant. Simplify the sentence for clarity.

× Sohu I think I can speak. A little bit.

✓ So, I think I can speak a little bit.

The sentence is fragmented and 'Sohu' seems to be a typo or mishearing. Correct the sentence to a complete thought.

× Lent is for for me.

✓ It is hard for me.

'Lent' is likely a mispronunciation of 'hard' or 'difficult'. The phrase 'for for me' is redundant. Use 'It is hard for me' to express difficulty.

× English is very, very different for me to learn it an.

✓ English is very, very difficult for me to learn.

The phrase 'different for me to learn it an' is incorrect. Use 'difficult for me to learn' to express the challenge.

× A lot of pupils spend spend many time too many times study English.

✓ A lot of pupils spend a lot of time studying English.

'Many time' should be 'a lot of time' because 'time' is uncountable. 'Too many times' is unnecessary here. Use the gerund 'studying' after 'spend time'.

× Oh, in the future I will learn CRAN and French because when? Because firstly, crayon.

✓ Oh, in the future I will learn Korean and French because...

'CRAN' and 'crayon' are likely mispronunciations of 'Korean'. Correct the spelling and remove 'because when?' which is unclear.

× Because I. Really love to really love watching K drama, so I want to learn it to to learn it an French because I really love and I want to go.

✓ Because I really love watching K drama, I want to learn it and French because I really love them and want to go there.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Remove unnecessary conjunctions and clarify the meaning.

× Because English half. Me too. Have many friends around, the work has improved my knowledge an can have me open my mind and I think is this.

✓ Because English helps me too. I have many friends around, and work has improved my knowledge and opened my mind, and I think this will help me in many things in the future about my jobs.

'Half' should be 'helps'. The sentence lacks proper pronouns and connectors. Correct verb forms and pronouns for clarity.