Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I come from Vietnam and I can speak Vietnamese. Besides that, I also speak English because it is an international language used by many people around the world. Knowing English helps me communicate with others effectively.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, và tránh lỗi phát âm. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I think learning a new language depends on age. It is easier for children to learn languages than adults. Therefore, when I have children, I will give them many opportunities to learn new languages.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời còn dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I plan to learn Korean in the future because I enjoy watching Korean movies. I want to understand the actors' sentences without relying on subtitles.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I learn English because it is an international language. Many people use it to study and work abroad, so knowing English gives me more opportunities.

× I can speak in Amies.

✓ I can speak Amies.

The verb 'speak' is not followed by the preposition 'in' when referring to languages. The correct form is 'speak' + language name directly. For example, 'I can speak English.'

× because now the day in this AR international language in the world, many people communicate in English.

✓ because nowadays English is an international language in the world, many people communicate in English.

The phrase 'now the day in this AR' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'nowadays' to indicate the current time. Also, 'English is an international language' is the correct adjective-noun order.

× So if you can speak English, I think this is just.

✓ So if you can speak English, I think this is fair.

The word 'just' is incorrectly used here. The correct adjective to express fairness or correctness is 'fair'.

× when you are up you are kiss is easier to learn a new language then you are an adult.

✓ when you are a kid, it is easier to learn a new language than when you are an adult.

The phrase 'you are kiss' is incorrect; it should be 'you are a kid'. Also, 'then' should be 'than' for comparison. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× So when I have a kid I will provide my kiss, my children with our opportunity to learn.

✓ So when I have a kid, I will provide my children with the opportunity to learn.

The phrase 'my kiss' is incorrect; it should be 'my children'. Also, 'our opportunity' should be 'the opportunity' to refer to a specific opportunity.

× I tend to learn a new language and it will be Korean.

✓ I tend to learn a new language, and it will be Korean.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses for clarity.

× I want to understand all of the sentence from the Korean actor actress when they are on the movie without transcript or the subtitles.

✓ I want to understand all of the sentences from the Korean actors and actresses when they are in the movie without transcripts or subtitles.

'Sentence' should be plural 'sentences' because it refers to multiple sentences. 'Actor actress' should be plural and separated as 'actors and actresses'. 'On the movie' should be 'in the movie'. 'Transcript' should be plural 'transcripts' and 'the subtitles' should be 'subtitles' without 'the'.

× In this is an international Congress of crowd the world announced today at is it more?

✓ English is an international language around the world, and today it is more widely used.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It is corrected to a clear statement about English being an international language widely used worldwide.

× There are more and more people learn in there to work and to study and work there a lot of opportunity for working on study abroad when you can communicate in English.

✓ There are more and more people learning there to work and study, and there are a lot of opportunities for working and studying abroad when you can communicate in English.

The verb 'learn' should be in the '-ing' form 'learning' after 'people'. 'In there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. 'Working on study abroad' is incorrect; it should be 'working and studying abroad'.