Part 1
Examinador
What languages can you speak?
Candidato
Uh, I can speak English besides my native language, Japanese. I started learning English when I was second grade in my elementary school. One of my friends invited me to attend local English school and that's how I began my studies.
Examinador
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidato
Yes, I think learning new languages is very challenging because it requires a lot of time and consistent practices. For example, people who have to work long hours is may feel difficult to keep a consistent practice time.
Examinador
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidato
Well, to be honest, I I have no specific plans to run new luggage. Nowadays translation AI become popular and it makes the importance of acquiring a new language law. Instead, I want to brush up my English skills.
Examinador
Why do you learn English?
Candidato
I like English because it allows me to communicate with my foreign client efficiently. Since I work as a lawyer, I have to review contracts written in English. My firm has a lot of foreign clients so so it's more important to learn English.
What languages can you speak?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答は基本的に質問に答えていますが、"Uh"のような不要な言葉を避け、文法的な誤り("second grade"の前に"the"が必要)を修正するとより自然になります。また、文を簡潔にし、5文以内に収めることを意識しましょう。
Ejemplo: I can speak English and my native language, Japanese. I started learning English in the second grade of elementary school after a friend invited me to attend a local English school.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 文法の誤り("is may"など)を修正し、より自然な表現を使いましょう。また、具体例を述べる際に、接続詞を使って文の流れをスムーズにすると良いです。
Ejemplo: Yes, learning new languages is very challenging because it requires a lot of time and consistent practice. For example, people who work long hours may find it difficult to maintain regular practice.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 発音や単語の誤り("run new luggage"は意味不明、"importance of acquiring a new language law"も不自然)を修正し、文法的に正しい表現を使いましょう。また、話の流れを明確にするために接続詞を活用してください。
Ejemplo: Well, to be honest, I have no specific plans to learn a new language. Nowadays, translation AI has become popular, which reduces the need to acquire new languages. Instead, I want to improve my English skills.
Why do you learn English?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 回答は明確で具体的ですが、"so so"の繰り返しを避け、文を簡潔にまとめるとより良くなります。また、接続詞を使って文のつながりを滑らかにしましょう。
Ejemplo: I like English because it allows me to communicate efficiently with my foreign clients. Since I work as a lawyer, I often review contracts written in English. Therefore, learning English is very important in my job.
× I started learning English when I was second grade in my elementary school.
✓ I started learning English when I was in second grade in my elementary school.
The phrase 'second grade' requires a preposition 'in' to indicate the time or level at which the action took place. Without 'in', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
× I think learning new languages is very challenging because it requires a lot of time and consistent practices.
✓ I think learning new languages is very challenging because it requires a lot of time and consistent practice.
The word 'practice' in this context is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'practices'. Using 'practice' is correct when referring to the act of doing something repeatedly.
× For example, people who have to work long hours is may feel difficult to keep a consistent practice time.
✓ For example, people who have to work long hours may find it difficult to keep a consistent practice time.
The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'may find' instead of 'is may feel'. Also, 'feel difficult' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'find it difficult'.
× Well, to be honest, I I have no specific plans to run new luggage.
✓ Well, to be honest, I have no specific plans to learn new languages.
The phrase 'run new luggage' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is 'learn new languages'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error.
× Nowadays translation AI become popular and it makes the importance of acquiring a new language law.
✓ Nowadays translation AI has become popular and it reduces the importance of acquiring a new language.
The verb 'become' should be in the present perfect form 'has become' to indicate a recent change. Also, 'makes the importance of acquiring a new language law' is incorrect; the intended meaning is that AI reduces the importance of learning a new language.
× My firm has a lot of foreign clients so so it's more important to learn English.
✓ My firm has a lot of foreign clients, so it's more important to learn English.
The repeated 'so' is a typographical error. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.