Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer clearly by stating the languages you speak and your proficiency level without redundancy.

Ejemplo: I can speak Georgian as my native language, English fluently, and I am a beginner in Russian.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and filler words to improve fluency. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific reasons why learning a new language is difficult.

Ejemplo: From my point of view, learning a new language is difficult because it is not our native tongue, and the grammar and vocabulary can be very different.

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and avoid unclear terms like 'Edwin's type'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain your goals specifically.

Ejemplo: Yes, of course. I want to reach a C1 or C2 level in English first, and then I plan to learn another language.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide clear and specific reasons for learning English, and organize your answer logically using linking words.

Ejemplo: First of all, English is an international language. I need it for my personal life, my studies, and my future career in cardiology.

× I can speak, uh, in English, uh, in Georgian, umm, as my native tongue, uh, and umm, Russian, uh, as beginner.

✓ I can speak English, Georgian as my native tongue, and Russian as a beginner.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before languages. In English, we say 'speak English' not 'speak in English'. Also, 'as beginner' needs an article 'a' to be correct.

× ...because, umm, uh, there is, uh, simple reason, umm, of it, uh, it isn't our, uh, native language and for us are different.

✓ ...because there is a simple reason: it isn't our native language and it is different for us.

The phrase 'there is simple reason' is missing the article 'a'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'for us are different' should be 'it is different for us' to be grammatically correct.

× I want to, umm uh, reach, uh, in English level, umm uh, with uh, Edwin's type, uh, C1UH and C2 of course.

✓ I want to reach the English level of, umm, Edwin's type, uh, C1 and C2, of course.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'English level'. The correct phrase is 'reach the English level'. Also, 'Edwin's type' is unclear but kept as is; 'C1UH' seems a typo and corrected to 'C1'.

× And then, uh, I want to uh, learn, uh, other language.

✓ And then, I want to learn another language.

'Other language' is incorrect here; 'another language' is the correct phrase when referring to one more language.

× I need it uh, for my, uh, personal life, uh, uh, in my study treatments, umm, and of course, umm, in cardio later, umm, and.

✓ I need it for my personal life, my studies, and of course, for cardiology later.

The phrase 'in my study treatments' is incorrect; 'my studies' is more appropriate. Also, 'in cardio later' is unclear and corrected to 'for cardiology later' to indicate purpose.