Part 1
Examinador
What languages can you speak?
Candidato
There are many languages such as Japanese, Chinese and English. I just can speak Chinese and English. Chinese is my first language and I am now study English.
Examinador
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidato
Yes, I think the a new language is difficult, but I think I should learn a new language because I want many opportunities and I want I can speak with people with more people.
Examinador
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidato
In the future I will learn the language. Yes, English. I think English is a famous language in other countries. I will start start good for English.
Examinador
Why do you learn English?
Candidato
Because English is a famous language in the world, I learn to English, can travel around the world and study in other countries. I can have many opportunities and learn about around the world.
What languages can you speak?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“I just can speak”应为“I can only speak”,“I am now study English”应为“I am now studying English”。建议注意动词时态和语序,回答时尽量简洁自然。
Ejemplo: I can speak Chinese and English. Chinese is my first language, and I am currently studying English.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复,如“the a new language”,“I want I can speak with people with more people”。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, learning a new language is difficult, but I want to do it because it will give me more opportunities and help me communicate with more people.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误,如“start start good for English”。建议明确表达意图,使用连词连接句子,并注意语法正确。
Ejemplo: In the future, I will continue learning English because it is a widely spoken language in many countries.
Why do you learn English?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“I learn to English”,“learn about around the world”。建议使用正确的动词形式,简洁表达原因,并使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ejemplo: I learn English because it is a global language. It allows me to travel, study abroad, and have more opportunities to learn about different cultures.
× There are many languages such as Japanese, Chinese and English.
✓ There are many languages, such as Japanese, Chinese, and English.
此句中缺少逗号,导致句子结构不清晰。应在列举项之间加逗号以分隔,符合英语书写规范。
× I just can speak Chinese and English.
✓ I can only speak Chinese and English.
情态动词'can'后面不应直接跟副词'just',应使用'only'来表达限定含义。
× I am now study English.
✓ I am now studying English.
现在进行时态需要动词-ing形式,'study'应改为'studying'。
× Yes, I think the a new language is difficult, but I think I should learn a new language because I want many opportunities and I want I can speak with people with more people.
✓ Yes, I think a new language is difficult, but I think I should learn a new language because I want many opportunities and I want to speak with more people.
'the a'是重复使用冠词错误,应去掉其一;'I want I can speak'结构错误,应改为'I want to speak';'with people with more people'表达重复且不通顺,应简化为'with more people'。
× In the future I will learn the language.
✓ In the future, I will learn other languages.
此处应表达学习其他语言的意思,'the language'不明确且不符合语境,应改为'other languages'。
× Yes, English.
✓ Yes, I will learn English.
回答不完整,缺少谓语动词,需补充完整句子。
× I will start start good for English.
✓ I will start to learn English well.
句子结构混乱,重复单词且表达不清,应调整为正确的表达方式。
× Because English is a famous language in the world, I learn to English, can travel around the world and study in other countries.
✓ Because English is a famous language in the world, I learn English to travel around the world and study in other countries.
'learn to English'中'learn'后不接介词'to',应直接接宾语;句子中缺少连接词,需调整句子结构使其通顺。
× I can have many opportunities and learn about around the world.
✓ I can have many opportunities and learn about the world.
'learn about around the world'结构错误,'around the world'应作为地点状语,'learn about the world'表达更准确。