Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and correcting unclear phrases such as 'as is my mother Tank'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: I mainly speak Burmese with my family and friends because it is my native language. English is my second language, which I use for studying, working, and communicating with people from different countries.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use more precise vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy by combining related points.

Ejemplo: Learning a new language is challenging because of its complex grammar rules and unfamiliar vocabulary. Additionally, pronunciation can be difficult, especially with new sounds and vowels.

Sugerencia: Correct minor errors such as 'lend' to 'learn' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be more concise and clear in your explanation.

Ejemplo: I will not learn other languages in the future because it requires a lot of time and energy that I don't have. Instead, I will focus on improving my English since it is a global language and helps me communicate worldwide.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: I learn English because it is essential for my life as an international student. Since I am pursuing a degree, I need to study in English, and it also helps me communicate with classmates and friends from different countries.

× I mainly speak Burmese to communicate with my family and friends, as is my mother Tank and uh, English is my second language to do my study and work and to communicate with people from different countries.

✓ I mainly speak Burmese to communicate with my family and friends, as does my mother Tank, and English is my second language for my studies, work, and to communicate with people from different countries.

The phrase 'as is my mother Tank' is incorrect; it should be 'as does my mother Tank' to correctly use the auxiliary verb for the third person singular. Also, 'to do my study and work' is awkward; 'for my studies and work' is more appropriate. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Learning a new language is a challenging text because of its complex grammar rules and uh, we also need to learn and memorize new vocabularies which are totally unfamiliar to us.

✓ Learning a new language is challenging because of its complex grammar rules, and we also need to learn and memorize new vocabulary which is totally unfamiliar to us.

The word 'text' is incorrect here; it should be omitted. Also, 'vocabularies' is incorrect as 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. These corrections make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× And, uh, some of the words and vowels may be really difficult to pronounce.

✓ And some of the words and vowels may be really difficult to pronounce.

The use of 'uh' is informal and unnecessary in written form. Removing it improves the sentence's formality and clarity.

× I will not try to lend other languages in the future because it will cost me a lot of time and energy which I don't have.

✓ I will not try to learn other languages in the future because it will cost me a lot of time and energy which I don't have.

The verb 'lend' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'learn' when referring to acquiring knowledge of languages.

× Instead, I'll try to focus on my English because I think I can communicate easily with people all over the world as English is a global language.

✓ Instead, I'll try to focus on my English because I think I can communicate easily with people all over the world, as English is a global language.

A comma is added before 'as' to separate the clauses properly, improving sentence clarity.

× I learn English because it's part of my life and I need it as I'm an international student always seeking a degree.

✓ I learn English because it's part of my life, and I need it as I'm an international student always seeking a degree.

A comma is added before 'and' to separate independent clauses, improving sentence structure.

× I need to study in English and I also need English to communicate with my classmates and friends from other countries.

✓ I need to study English, and I also need English to communicate with my classmates and friends from other countries.

The preposition 'in' before 'English' is unnecessary when referring to the subject of study; 'study English' is correct.