Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating "speak" and "language," you could use synonyms or rephrase. Also, adding a linking phrase would make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: I primarily speak Japanese, as it is my native language. Additionally, I have some proficiency in English, which I began studying in junior high school. However, I am not yet fluent and cannot speak as naturally as native speakers from the UK or the US.

Sugerencia: Your response addresses the question well and provides reasons, but you could improve by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors such as plural forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, learning a new language is generally challenging for most people, particularly for Japanese learners. This is because the pronunciation, grammar, and vocabulary of languages like English and French differ significantly from Japanese, making the learning process more difficult.

Sugerencia: Your answer is well-structured and informative. To enhance it further, try to use more natural expressions and linking phrases to improve flow. Also, clarify what you mean by "complex style language skills" for better understanding.

Ejemplo: I would definitely like to learn French because I hope to work at the French Bureau soon, which demands advanced language skills. Moreover, French is widely spoken in African countries such as Senegal and Mali, so learning it would be very useful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is personal and engaging, but to improve, try to avoid minor grammatical mistakes and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, rephrase awkward expressions for more natural English.

Ejemplo: I have been learning English for many years because I find it enjoyable. When I was in elementary school, I often watched professional wrestling programmes in English, which sparked my interest in experiencing cultures different from my own.

× Yes, in general, it is quite challenging for everyone to learn new language skills, especially for Japanese people.

✓ Yes, in general, it is quite challenging for everyone to learn new language skills, especially for Japanese people.

No correction needed here as 'language skills' is correctly plural and fits the context.

× This is because pronunciations, grammars and vocabularies of English and French are very different from those in Japanese.

✓ This is because the pronunciations, grammar and vocabulary of English and French are very different from those in Japanese.

The words 'grammar' and 'vocabulary' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralised. Also, 'pronunciations' should be preceded by 'the' to specify particular pronunciations. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× I found it's interesting to get in touch with different cultures from Japanese.

✓ I found it interesting to get in touch with different cultures from Japan.

The phrase 'I found it's interesting' is incorrect; it should be 'I found it interesting' because 'found' is followed by an object and an adjective. Also, 'from Japanese' is incorrect; the correct form is 'from Japan' to refer to the country or culture.