Part 1
Examinador
What languages can you speak?
Candidato
As a Chinese native speakers, I can usually speak Mandarin fluently because I usually speak Mandarin with my parents, my family members or my classmates, my friends. So it's my.
Examinador
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidato
Yeah, of course. I think learn a new language is very difficult challenge for everybody to to do so. For example, it requires a lot of vocabulary and a new unfamiliar grammars. And for new learners it will.
Examinador
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidato
Yes, I'm going to study English or French, but I'm prefer the English because it is very widely used in modern life so it is very helpful.
Examinador
Why do you learn English?
Candidato
Are there are a lot of reasons why are going to learn English? The first and important one is that English is now widely used international. In addition, if I study English, it is helpful for me to study, research or communicate with foreign colleagues.
What languages can you speak?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 答案要更简洁并注意语法与发音。直接先给出要点,然后用一两句补充细节。注意单复数和冠词(a Chinese native speaker),避免重复(不要多次说“usually”),并保持句子不超过5句。
Ejemplo: I am a native Chinese speaker and I speak Mandarin fluently. I usually use Mandarin at home and with my classmates and friends. I can also use basic English for travel.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 答案要有完整句子并减少重复。先给直接观点,再用一到两句具体原因支持。注意语法(learn → learning;a new unfamiliar grammars → unfamiliar grammar or new grammar structures)。避免句子未完成。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think learning a new language is challenging. It requires memorising a large amount of vocabulary and getting used to unfamiliar grammar structures. For beginners, speaking confidently can also be difficult.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并注意语法(I'm prefer → I prefer)。给出明确选择并加一两条具体原因,用连词使语意连贯。保持句子数在五句以内。
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to learn other languages, especially English. I prefer English because it is widely used in business and travel, and it would help my career opportunities.
Why do you learn English?
Puntuación: 66.0Sugerencia: 回答要直接且语法正确。先给主要原因,然后用具体例子支持。修正句子结构(e.g. "widely used internationally"),去掉多余的疑问语气和重复。
Ejemplo: There are several reasons. The main one is that English is used internationally, so learning it helps me access academic resources. It also makes it easier to communicate and collaborate with foreign colleagues.
× As a Chinese native speakers, I can usually speak Mandarin fluently because I usually speak Mandarin with my parents, my family members or my classmates, my friends. So it's my.
✓ As a Chinese native speaker, I can usually speak Mandarin fluently because I usually speak Mandarin with my parents, family members, classmates, and friends. So it is my native language.
错误类型——代词/名词单复数与代词搭配不当。原句中“speakers”与主语不一致,应为单数“speaker”;列举人时逗号与连接词使用混乱,且句尾“So it's my.” 不完整,应补全为“my native language”。改进建议:注意主语与名词的单复数一致;列举多项人或事物时使用并列连词(and);避免省略导致句子不完整。
× I think learn a new language is very difficult challenge for everybody to to do so.
✓ I think learning a new language is a very difficult challenge for everybody to do.
错误类型——现在时/非谓语动词形式使用不当。原句中动词“learn”在“I think”之后应使用动名词“learning”作主语(或用不定式结构);并且有多余的重复“to to”。改进建议:在表示“认为做某事是……”的结构中,用动名词作主语或用不定式,但注意不重复。
× For example, it requires a lot of vocabulary and a new unfamiliar grammars.
✓ For example, it requires a lot of vocabulary and unfamiliar grammar.
错误类型——形容词/名词使用错误与数一致错误。原句中“a new unfamiliar grammars”在形容词和冠词使用上混乱:grammar通常作不可数名词,不能用复数“grammars”,且“a new unfamiliar”连用也不自然。改进建议:把“grammar”作为不可数名词,使用一个形容词“unfamiliar”或“new”和“unfamiliar”任选其一,避免冠词与不可数名词冲突。
× And for new learners it will.
✓ And for new learners it will be difficult.
错误类型——句子缺少谓语或不完整。原句“it will.”不完整,缺少补语。改进建议:补全句子意思,给出谓语和表语,例如“will be difficult”以与前文意思连贯。
× Yes, I'm going to study English or French, but I'm prefer the English because it is very widely used in modern life so it is very helpful.
✓ Yes, I'm going to study English or French, but I prefer English because it is widely used in modern life, so it is very helpful.
错误类型——情态动词/动词搭配使用错误。原句中“I'm prefer”错误地把动词用进行时,偏好动词“prefer”应使用一般现在时“I prefer”;此外“the English”中不需要定冠词,应该是“English”。改进建议:表示一般偏好用一般现在时;语言名称前通常不加定冠词;注意句子断句,用逗号分隔从句。
× Are there are a lot of reasons why are going to learn English?
✓ There are a lot of reasons why I am going to learn English.
错误类型——句子结构错误。原句中语序和助动词使用混乱,重复“are”,且缺少主语“I”。改进建议:陈述句应为“There are a lot of reasons why I am going to learn English.” 若为疑问句需调整成“Are there a lot of reasons why you are going to learn English?” 根据语境使用正确的人称和语序。
× The first and important one is that English is now widely used international.
✓ The first and most important one is that English is now widely used internationally.
错误类型——定冠词和词类使用错误。原句中“used international”词类错误,应该使用副词“internationally”;另外“most important”比“and important”更自然。改进建议:注意形容词、副词的形式区别;使用定冠词“the”修饰序数或特定项时,结构应为“the first and most important one”。
× In addition, if I study English, it is helpful for me to study, research or communicate with foreign colleagues.
✓ In addition, if I study English, it will be helpful for me to study, do research, or communicate with foreign colleagues.
错误类型——介词/动词搭配问题。原句中时态和形式不一致,前半句用现在时“it is helpful”与条件“if I study”可以,但更自然的是用“will be helpful”;“research”在此应使用动词短语“do research”。改进建议:保持条件句时态一致;将名词“research”改为动词短语“do research”以匹配并列结构;注意并列项一致性。