Language— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答需要更直接且有条理。避免重复和不必要的感叹词（如“Oh, Oh my God”），并用一两句简洁陈述主要信息，再用一两句具体细节支持。例如说明学习每种语言的时长或学习途径。连接词（例如“and”、“for example”）应恰当使用以保持连贯。注意语法（例如“I have studied English since I was five”而非“I have studied English science”）。

Ejemplo: I can speak Chinese, English and some Korean. I have studied English since I was five, so I’m quite fluent. I also learned Korean by watching Korean TV series, which helped me pick up everyday phrases quickly.

Sugerencia: 表达要更准确并给出合理具体的理由。避免含糊或错误的短语（如“I have Thailand for language learning”应改为“I have a talent for languages”）。用连接词（because, for example, so）组织观点，并给出具体经历的清楚描述和结果。句子不要过长或重复。

Ejemplo: No, I don’t find it very difficult because I have a talent for learning languages. For example, when I stayed in Japan two years ago I practiced every day and after about a week I could use basic Japanese sentences to communicate.

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、逻辑更清晰，避免刻板印象（如“Frenchmen are always very romantic”）和语法错误（如“taught teach me”）。先直接回答，然后说明理由或目标（例如工作、文化或兴趣），并用一两个具体细节支持。控制在最多五句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to learn French in the future because I am interested in French culture and art. Learning French would help me understand literature and communicate better when I travel to France.

Sugerencia: 开门见山回答动机，并用清晰的原因支持。避免冗长重复（如两次提到“study it well”）。使用准确表达（例如“widen my horizons”）。可以补充具体目标和计划（比如准备某项考试或计划去哪个国家留学）。

Ejemplo: I study English to widen my horizons and travel more easily, since it’s widely used internationally. I’m also planning to study abroad in two years, so improving my English will help me get into an overseas university.

× Oh, Oh my God, that is very interesting. Chinese, English and uh, Korean of course, especially English.

✓ Oh, my God, that's very interesting. I speak Chinese, English and Korean, especially English.

原句为口语碎片句，信息组织混乱，缺少完整主谓结构。应将感叹与陈述分开，并在陈述中使用完整主语和动词（I speak）来列举语言。建议把感叹短语与主句分为两句，列举时用逗号或并列连词连接。

× I have studied English science, I was only 5 years old and Korean.

✓ I have studied English since I was only five years old, and I also studied Korean.

原句混用了现在完成时和过去时结构不清。“since I was only 5 years old”需与现在完成时连用表从过去到现在的持续，应使用since引导时间点并把动词改为现在完成时；另外“Korean”作为并列项需用完整谓语。建议将句子重组以保持时态一致。

× Oh, that is the most interesting part. I studied Korean from the Korean TV series, for example. Uh, the goddess.

✓ Oh, that's the most interesting part. I learned Korean from Korean TV series, for example, from a show called "The Goddess."

原句中“the goddess”只是孤立短语，缺少与前句的连接和冠词/引号来标示剧名。应使用learned或studied并明确说明剧名，保持句子完整。

× No, it is not difficult at all because I think that I have Thailand for language learning.

✓ No, it's not difficult at all because I have a talent for language learning.

原句“have Thailand for language learning”是错误搭配和词汇使用（Thailand是国名，显然笔误或词错）。应使用“have a talent/knack for”表示擅长某事。时态保持现在一般时。

× For example, two years ago I was in Japan and I can study. I could study their language for only about 7 days after I went back to my country.

✓ For example, two years ago I was in Japan and I could study their language for only about seven days while I was there. After I went back to my country, I could still speak some Japanese frequently.

原句时态和时间状语搭配混乱。“could study...for only about 7 days after I went back”逻辑不顺，应把在日本学习和回国后的持续 kemampuan 分开描述，并注意数字写法一致（seven）。建议使用过去时描述特定过去事件。

× I can even speak Japanese frequently.

✓ I could even speak Japanese quite often.

句子描述过去的能力或习惯，应用过去时“could”而非现在时“can”；同时“frequently”与语境搭配改为“quite often”更自然。

× If I have some chances in the future, I think I will study French because I think that Frenchmen are always very romantic.

✓ If I have the chance in the future, I think I will study French because I think French people are always very romantic.

“have some chances”搭配不自然，应使用“have the chance”或“have opportunities”。“Frenchmen”较正式或刻板，建议使用“French people”。时态（if + will）改为if + will is acceptable but better as conditional: If I have the chance, I will... 保持简单将来时。

× They can bring me some different experience in a period of relationship, or they can also teach me some principles in my life and taught teach me.

✓ They can bring me different experiences in a relationship, and they can also teach me some principles for life.

原句冗长且有词序和单复数错误（experience应为experiences），“in a period of relationship”不自然，应改为“in a relationship”。末尾有重复“taught teach me”。建议精简并使用并列连词连接两部分。

× Because I want to widen my horizon as well as I want to travel around the world and English is the official language in this world, all of the corners.

✓ Because I want to widen my horizons and travel around the world, and English is the official language in many parts of the world.

原句“widen my horizon”应为复数“widen my horizons”。“the official language in this world, all of the corners”措辞混乱，应改为“in many parts of the world”或“around the world”。注意并列结构，避免重复“as well as I want”。

× So I have to study it very well and I want to study abroad 2 years later, so I want to study it well and.

✓ So I have to study it well, and I want to study abroad in two years, so I need to prepare thoroughly.

“2 years later”与语境不够自然，应改为“in two years”。结尾不完整，应补全目的。数字用words（two）更规范。时态用将来计划表达（want to study abroad in two years）。