Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Daha qısa və aydın cümlələr qurmağa çalışın, həmçinin keçmiş zaman formalarını düzgün istifadə edin.

Ejemplo: Usually, I don't celebrate my birthday. However, last year I invited close friends from school and other places to a chosen venue, and we celebrated together.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrinizdə zaman formalarını düzgün istifadə edin və təkrarlamalardan qaçının. Daha təbii ifadələr seçin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I celebrated my birthday every year with my family. My aunt would bake a big cake, and we all enjoyed the celebration together.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, həmçinin fikirinizi daha dəqiq ifadə etmək üçün əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, celebrating my birthday was very important to me. However, for the past three or four years, I haven't celebrated it because I don't find it as important now.

Sugerencia: Cavabınızda daha spesifik olun və fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəblər verin. Həmçinin, cümlələrinizi daha təbii və axıcı edin.

Ejemplo: In my country, people don't usually celebrate birthdays as very important events. However, if I had to choose, I would say the president's birthday is important because he is widely respected.

× Usually I don't celebrate my birthday, but last time when I celebrate my birthday I invited my close friends from school and from other places and I we choose one place and I celebrate my birthday there.

✓ Usually I don't celebrate my birthday, but last time when I celebrated my birthday I invited my close friends from school and from other places and we chose one place and I celebrated my birthday there.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verbs 'celebrate', 'choose', and 'celebrate' should be in the past tense 'celebrated' and 'chose' to maintain correct tense consistency.

× When I was a child, I used to celebrate my birthday every year and usually I was celebrating my birthday with my family members.

✓ When I was a child, I used to celebrate my birthday every year and usually I celebrated my birthday with my family members.

The phrase 'was celebrating' is a past continuous tense which is not appropriate here; 'usually' indicates a habitual action in the past, so simple past 'celebrated' is correct.

× My aunt was making a big cake for all the family members and we were celebrating like that.

✓ My aunt made a big cake for all the family members and we celebrated like that.

The past continuous tense 'was making' and 'were celebrating' are not suitable for habitual past actions; simple past 'made' and 'celebrated' are more appropriate.

× Actually, when I was a child it used to be very necessary for me, but now I think no, it's not that important because if I'm not mistaken, for three or four years I haven't been celebrating my birthday.

✓ Actually, when I was a child it used to be very necessary for me, but now I think no, it's not that important because, if I'm not mistaken, for three or four years I haven't celebrated my birthday.

The present perfect continuous 'haven't been celebrating' is less appropriate here; the present perfect simple 'haven't celebrated' is better to express the action of not celebrating over a period of time.

× In my country, actually, there's no one that's very important to celebrate their birthday, but I can say the president because everyone loves him.

✓ In my country, actually, there is no one whose birthday is very important to celebrate, but I can say the president's because everyone loves him.

The original sentence misuses 'there's no one that's very important to celebrate their birthday'; it should specify 'whose birthday is very important' to correctly express possession and the subject of celebration.