Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些冗长且语法不够准确，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意单复数和时态的正确使用。

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually go out with my friends to have dinner and take some beautiful photos. Then, they bring a birthday cake and sing songs for me, which makes me very happy.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: When I was young, I usually went to school on my birthday. For example, on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodles and gave me a special gift, which I still remember clearly.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够自然，建议注意主谓一致和介词的正确使用，同时丰富表达内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it allows me to show appreciation to those who support me and have done me many favors.

Sugerencia: 回答表达不够清晰，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且提供更具体的理由和例子。

Ejemplo: I think the birthdays of people who contribute to society, like community leaders or heroes, are the most important to celebrate in China because they help maintain our peaceful life.

× Actually I often go out with my friends to have dinner or take a beautiful photographs and then they will bring a birthday cake and sing birthday songs for me which makes me very happy and glad.

✓ Actually I often go out with my friends to have dinner or take beautiful photographs and then they will bring a birthday cake and sing birthday songs for me which makes me very happy and glad.

这里“take a beautiful photographs”中“photographs”是复数，前面不应该加不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”。

× Actually I often go out with my friends to have dinner or take a beautiful photographs and then they will bring a birthday cake and sing birthday songs for me which makes me very happy and glad.

✓ Actually I often go out with my friends to have dinner or take beautiful photographs and then they will bring a birthday cake and sing birthday songs for me which makes me very happy and glad.

“photographs”是复数形式，前面不应该使用单数不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”。

× As a child, I usually went to school as usual, especially on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodle and pray that a special gift for me, which makes me very forgetful.

✓ As a child, I usually went to school as usual. Especially on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodles and prayed for a special gift for me, which made me very happy.

“noodle”应为复数“noodles”，表示一碗面条；“pray”应使用过去式“prayed”，因为描述过去的动作；“which makes me very forgetful”语义不通，应改为“which made me very happy”更符合语境。

× As a child, I usually went to school as usual, especially on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodle and pray that a special gift for me, which makes me very forgetful.

✓ As a child, I usually went to school as usual. Especially on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodles and prayed for a special gift for me, which made me very happy.

“a bowl of noodle”中“noodle”应为复数形式“noodles”，表示一碗面条。

× As a child, I usually went to school as usual, especially on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodle and pray that a special gift for me, which makes me very forgetful.

✓ As a child, I usually went to school as usual. Especially on my 8th birthday, my mother cooked a bowl of noodles and prayed for a special gift for me, which made me very happy.

“pray”应使用过去式“prayed”，因为描述的是过去发生的动作。

× Yes, absolutely. It is vital for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a great way to show my appreciation to someone who support for me and do a lot favor for me.

✓ Yes, absolutely. It is vital for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a great way to show my appreciation to someone who supports me and does a lot of favors for me.

“support for me”中“for”多余，应直接用“support me”；“do a lot favor”中“favor”应为复数“favors”，且缺少第三人称单数动词“does”。

× Yes, absolutely. It is vital for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a great way to show my appreciation to someone who support for me and do a lot favor for me.

✓ Yes, absolutely. It is vital for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a great way to show my appreciation to someone who supports me and does a lot of favors for me.

主语“someone”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“supports”和“does”。

× Yes, absolutely. It is vital for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a great way to show my appreciation to someone who support for me and do a lot favor for me.

✓ Yes, absolutely. It is vital for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a great way to show my appreciation to someone who supports me and does a lot of favors for me.

“a lot favor”中“favor”应为复数形式“favors”，表示许多帮助。

× I suppose the present birthday of someone who makes an effort to develop the society can be celebrated in China.

✓ I suppose the birthday of someone who makes an effort to develop society can be celebrated in China.

“the present birthday”表达不自然，应去掉“present”；“develop the society”中“the”多余，通常说“develop society”。