Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'sometime' to 'sometimes' and avoid repetition like 'give give'. Use linking words effectively to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually buy a cake and some chocolates. Then, I organize a small party at home and invite some friends and close relatives. Sometimes, I also give clothes as gifts to my guests.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences to improve fluency. Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words like 'also' and 'apart from that' properly to connect ideas. Pay attention to grammar, for example, 'I also my parents also gifted me' should be corrected.

Ejemplo: I vividly remember that when I was a kid, I used to distribute candies at my school. Also, I bought a delicious cake and cut it with my friends at home. Apart from that, my parents gifted me new items like a doll.

Sugerencia: Reduce the use of filler words to sound more confident and fluent. Use correct grammar such as 'it gives me a chance' instead of 'it give me chance'. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' effectively.

Ejemplo: Definitely, it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because it brings back nostalgic memories of my childhood celebrations. Moreover, it gives me a chance to get together with my family and spend quality time.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'make room'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Also, be careful with cultural accuracy and phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I am not sure about specific celebrities whose birthdays are celebrated in China. However, I think it is important for Chinese people to celebrate the birthdays of their president or prime minister because they are important leaders of the country.

× I firstly I buy cake and some chocolates.

✓ I firstly buy cake and some chocolates.

The sentence contains a repetition of the subject 'I' which is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Additionally, I sometime give give clothes.

✓ Additionally, I sometimes give clothes.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'give' is repeated twice, which is incorrect. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Apart from this, I also my parents also gifted me some new items like a doll.

✓ Apart from this, my parents also gifted me some new items like a doll.

The phrase 'I also my parents also' is incorrect and redundant. Removing 'I also' clarifies the sentence and maintains correct past tense usage.

× Moreover, uh, it give me chance to, uh, to get together with my family members and spend quality time with.

✓ Moreover, uh, it gives me a chance to, uh, get together with my family members and spend quality time with them.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'a chance' requires the article 'a', and the sentence needs 'them' at the end to complete the phrase 'spend quality time with them'.