Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cümlələrdə qrammatik səhvləri düzəltmək və daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə etmək lazımdır. Məsələn, 'I try to had' əvəzinə 'I try to have' və ya 'I usually have' demək daha düzgündür. Həmçinin, fikirləri daha aydın və qısa cümlələrlə ifadə etmək tövsiyə olunur.

Ejemplo: I usually have a wonderful time with my family on my birthday. We go to a nice restaurant and enjoy delicious food. After that, we take photos together. I have loved celebrating my birthday since I was a child.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrdə söz seçimi və qrammatika səhvləri var. 'Whipped my birthday' ifadəsi düzgün deyil, əvəzinə 'looked forward to my birthday' istifadə edilməlidir. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadələrdən istifadə etmək lazımdır.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I always looked forward to my birthday because of the gifts I received. My family often gave me expensive presents, which made me very happy.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrdə məntiqi əlaqə və qrammatika problemləri var. İfadələr daha aydın və məntiqli olmalıdır. Məsələn, 'celebrating birthday is the important things' əvəzinə 'celebrating birthdays is very important' demək daha düzgündür. Fikirləri daha səlis və ardıcıl ifadə etmək tövsiyə olunur.

Ejemplo: Absolutely, I think celebrating birthdays is very important. It is a special day to remember when you were born, so everyone deserves to have a good time on their birthday.

Sugerencia: Cümlələrdə qrammatik səhvlər və natamam fikirlər var. 'Fathers is' əvəzinə 'fathers are' demək lazımdır. Fikri tam ifadə etmək və cümlələri tamamlanmış şəkildə qurmaq vacibdir.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I'm not sure, but I think maybe the father's birthday is the most important to celebrate. Fathers are important members of the family and they work hard for their children and wife.

× I try to had a splendid time with my family in my birthday umm.

✓ I tried to have a splendid time with my family on my birthday.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'try to had' which mixes present tense 'try' with past tense 'had'. The correct past tense form is 'tried to have'. Also, 'in my birthday' should be 'on my birthday' because we use 'on' with days and dates.

× I try to had a splendid time with my family in my birthday umm.

✓ I tried to have a splendid time with my family on my birthday.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'birthday' is 'on'.

× We go out to a tasty restaurant and enjoy the delicious meal.

✓ We go out to a tasty restaurant and enjoy a delicious meal.

The sentence is in present tense which is acceptable for habitual actions. However, 'the delicious meal' implies a specific meal; 'a delicious meal' is more general and appropriate here.

× After that we take photos, like to be honest they take photo of me and I like celebrating birthday since my childhood.

✓ After that, we take photos; to be honest, they take photos of me and I have liked celebrating birthdays since my childhood.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match 'take photos'. Also, 'like celebrating birthday since my childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'have liked celebrating birthdays' to indicate a continuous action from past to present and plural 'birthdays'.

× When I was young, I whipped my birthday because of the gifts that I gave.

✓ When I was young, I looked forward to my birthday because of the gifts that I received.

'Whipped my birthday' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'looked forward to my birthday'. Also, 'gifts that I gave' should be 'gifts that I received'.

× I love getting gifts and in my young birthday, my family gives me really like expensive things, expensive gifts.

✓ I love getting gifts and when I was young, my family gave me really expensive things, expensive gifts.

The phrase 'in my young birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was young'. Also, 'gives' should be past tense 'gave' to match the past time frame.

× Absolutely, celebrating birthday is the important things in the world.

✓ Absolutely, celebrating birthdays is an important thing in the world.

'Celebrating birthday' should be plural 'celebrating birthdays' to generalize the concept. 'The important things' is plural but should be singular 'an important thing' to agree with the singular subject.

× How can you know when I can't celebrate your birthday?

✓ How can you know if I can't celebrate your birthday?

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'when' should be replaced with 'if' to express a condition.

× Even I just hate it 'cause you deserve it and it was a day that you born.

✓ Even if I just hate it, you deserve it and it was the day you were born.

'You born' is missing the auxiliary verb 'were'. Also, 'a day that you born' should be 'the day you were born'.

× You have to have a good time, have a splendid time at this.

✓ You have to have a good time, have a splendid time on this day.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'on this day' is the correct phrase to use with time expressions.

× To be honest, I'm not sure at this, but I think maybe father's birthday 'cause like the fathers is so important member in the family and they work.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure about this, but I think maybe father's birthday because fathers are such important members in the family and they work hard.

'Not sure at this' should be 'not sure about this'. 'The fathers is' should be 'fathers are' to agree in number. Also, 'important member' should be plural 'important members'.

× They try hard for their daughters, son, wife and.

✓ They try hard for their daughters, sons, wives, and family.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks parallel structure. It should list plural family members consistently and complete the thought.