Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with appropriate connectors.

Ejemplo: I usually celebrate my birthday with my family and friends. Before the day, I like to go shopping to prepare for the celebration. On the birthday itself, we stay at home and cut a cake together.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide specific details and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, correct verb tenses and sentence structures are important.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I usually spent my birthday with my friends and family. For example, during school time, we used to dress differently from others and give chocolates to each other as gifts.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to express your ideas more fluently and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about why the celebration is important to you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it only happens once a year. On that day, I invite my family, neighbors, and close friends to my home, and we spend quality time together.

Sugerencia: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer the question directly and provide reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

Ejemplo: In China, I believe every individual's birthday is important because it only comes once a year. Celebrating birthdays allows us to spend quality time with friends and family.

× I usually go on a shopping before my birthday coming

✓ I usually go shopping before my birthday comes

The phrase 'go on a shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'my birthday coming' should be 'my birthday comes' to use the correct verb form and tense.

× we are we were used to celebrate birthday at home to just cutting a cake

✓ we used to celebrate birthdays at home by just cutting a cake

The phrase 'are we were used to' is incorrect; 'used to' is sufficient to indicate past habitual action. Also, 'celebrate birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' and 'to just cutting a cake' should be 'by just cutting a cake' to use the correct preposition and verb form.

× I usually spend a birthday with my friends and family members

✓ I usually spent my birthday with my friends and family members

Since the question refers to the past ('when you were young'), the verb should be in the past tense 'spent' instead of present tense 'spend'. Also, 'a birthday' should be 'my birthday' to specify the occasion.

× we used to dress, uh, different from the other people

✓ we used to dress differently from other people

The adverb 'differently' should be used instead of the adjective 'different' to modify the verb 'dress'. Also, 'the other people' is better as 'other people' in this context.

× And we can we can give a chocolate to a.

✓ And we could give chocolates to others

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('we can we can'). It should be corrected to 'we could give chocolates to others' to make it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× it comes, uh, it comes in once in a year

✓ it comes once a year

The phrase 'comes in once in a year' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'comes once a year'. The modal verb is not necessary here.

× my close friends also invited at my home

✓ my close friends are also invited to my home

The verb 'invited' needs the auxiliary 'are' to form the passive voice, and the correct preposition is 'to' instead of 'at' when referring to being invited to a place.

× just we spent time with

✓ we just spend time together

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. It should be 'we just spend time together' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× individuals have a on their special day

✓ individuals have a special day

The phrase 'have a on their special day' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'have a special day'.

× it gives us to time to spend quality time with friends

✓ it gives us time to spend quality time with friends

The phrase 'gives us to time' is incorrect; the preposition 'to' should be removed to correctly say 'gives us time'.