Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer wa natural desu ga, 'memorable is very memorable' no you na fukushuu ya chotto muzukashii hyougen wa saisho kara saisho made yoku kangaete, motto shizen ni shiyou. Mata, setsumei wa motto shousai ni shite, rikai o fukameru you ni shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually hang out with my friends after school. Although I don't see it as a very important day, I enjoy going out to dinner with them because it creates memorable moments. Therefore, I like to celebrate it every year in this simple way.

Sugerencia: Kantan na bunshou desu ga, 'Take Me Out' no you na capital letter no tsukaikata ya, 'she she' no you na kurikaeshi wa yoku arimasen. Mata, setsumei wa motto shousai ni shite, jiko no kankei ya kanjou o fukameru to yoi desu.

Ejemplo: When I was young, my mother used to take me out to buy a birthday cake, and my family would give me many presents. I always looked forward to that moment with excitement. However, since it was similar every year, I don't remember any particularly special birthday.

Sugerencia: Kantan de wakariyasui desu ga, motto retsugo ya setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte, hanashi no nagare o yoku shite kudasai. Mata, motto jiko no kankei ya omoi o fukameru to, hanashi ga yori omoshiroku narimasu.

Ejemplo: I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important. For me, birthdays are just milestones, so I don't do anything extravagant. However, since it marks the day I was born, I believe it's a good opportunity to reflect on my life.

Sugerencia: Answer wa totemo shizen desu ga, 'parents birthdays are important' no you na hyougen wa 'parents' birthdays are important' to shite, seikaku ni shite kudasai. Mata, motto setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte, hanashi o rikai shiyasuku shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: Although I am not Chinese and don't know much, I understand that respecting elders is important in China. Therefore, I think celebrating parents' birthdays is significant because they gave us life and deserve our respect.

× But being with my friends and going out to dinner is a memorable is very memorable for me, so I like to do it annually.

✓ But being with my friends and going out to dinner is very memorable for me, so I like to do it annually.

The phrase 'is a memorable is very memorable' contains a redundancy and incorrect article usage. 'Memorable' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a' before it in this context. The correct form is 'is very memorable'. Remove the extra 'is' and 'a' to correct the sentence.

× My mother used to Take Me Out to shop for my birthday cake and she she and my family also gave me a lot of presents.

✓ My mother used to take me out to shop for my birthday cake and she and my family also gave me a lot of presents.

The sentence has capitalization errors and a repeated word 'she'. 'Take Me Out' should be 'take me out' as it is not a proper noun. Also, the repeated 'she' is a typographical error. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I was very really anticipating for that moment.

✓ So I was really anticipating that moment.

The phrase 'very really' is redundant; 'really' alone suffices. Also, 'anticipating for' is incorrect; 'anticipate' does not require 'for'. The correct phrase is 'anticipating that moment'. Removing 'very' and 'for' corrects the sentence.

× I think celebrating parents birthdays are important.

✓ I think celebrating parents' birthdays is important.

'Parents birthdays' should be possessive plural 'parents' birthdays' to indicate birthdays belonging to parents. Also, the subject 'celebrating parents' birthdays' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Correcting possessive form and verb agreement fixes the sentence.