Birthday— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
What do you usually do on your birthday?
Candidato
I really enjoy my birthday. I go out with my friends.
Examinador
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
Candidato
Usually all of my close friends are come my house. We all have fun singing, dancing and just relax.
Examinador
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
Candidato
When I was young, for me to celebrate birthday, it is important, but all the ages I did, I didn't hear about it.
Examinador
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
Candidato
I don't know.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
What do you usually do on your birthday?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: თქვენი პასუხი ბუნებრივია, მაგრამ შეგიძლიათ უფრო დეტალურად აღწეროთ, მაგალითად, სად მიდიხართ და რას აკეთებთ მეგობრებთან ერთად, რათა პასუხი უფრო საინტერესო და ინფორმატიული გახდეს.
Ejemplo: I usually celebrate my birthday by going out to a nice restaurant with my close friends, where we enjoy good food and have great conversations.
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს გრამატიკულ შეცდომებს და არ არის ბუნებრივი. გირჩევთ გამოიყენოთ წარსული დრო და უფრო სუფთა სტრუქტურა, ასევე გამოიყენოთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს ლოგიკური და გასაგები.
Ejemplo: When I was young, all my close friends used to come to my house. We would have fun singing, dancing, and relaxing together.
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: თქვენი პასუხი არ არის ნათელი და შეიცავს გრამატიკულ შეცდომებს. გირჩევთ პირდაპირ და გასაგებად გამოხატოთ თქვენი აზრი, გამოიყენოთ წარსული და აწმყო დროები სწორად და დაამატოთ მიზეზები ან მაგალითები.
Ejemplo: I think celebrating my birthday was important when I was young because it made me feel special. However, as I grew older, I didn't celebrate it as much.
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: თქვენი პასუხი ძალიან მოკლე და არასრულყოფილია. გირჩევთ სცადოთ პასუხის გაფართოება, მაგალითად, შეგიძლიათ თქვათ, რომ არ იცით, მაგრამ გსურთ მეტი ინფორმაცია ან რომ ყველა ოჯახის წევრის დაბადების დღე მნიშვნელოვანია.
Ejemplo: I'm not sure whose birthday is considered the most important in China, but I believe that celebrating family members' birthdays is very meaningful.
Gramática
× Usually all of my close friends are come my house.
✓ Usually all of my close friends come to my house.
The phrase 'are come' is incorrect because 'come' is not used with 'are' in the present continuous form here. The correct form is the simple present 'come' to indicate habitual action. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed before 'my house'.
× Usually all of my close friends are come my house.
✓ Usually all of my close friends come to my house.
The preposition 'to' is missing before 'my house'. In English, when indicating movement towards a place, the preposition 'to' is required.
× We all have fun singing, dancing and just relax.
✓ We all have fun singing, dancing and just relaxing.
After 'have fun', verbs should be in the '-ing' form to indicate activities enjoyed. 'Relax' should be 'relaxing' to maintain parallel structure with 'singing' and 'dancing'.
× When I was young, for me to celebrate birthday, it is important, but all the ages I did, I didn't hear about it.
✓ When I was young, celebrating my birthday was important to me, but at all other ages, I didn't think about it.
The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The phrase 'for me to celebrate birthday, it is important' is awkward and incorrect. The corrected sentence uses a clearer structure and correct tense to express the intended meaning.
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