Birthday— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了庆祝生日的活动和感受，但有些语法错误和表达不够自然，例如“get it with my close friends”应为“get together with my close friends”。建议注意动词短语的正确使用，并避免时态混用，使表达更地道。

Ejemplo: On my birthday, I usually get together with my close friends to enjoy a delicious dinner because celebrating with them makes me feel happier and more connected. After that, we often go out to have fun and sometimes buy lottery tickets for luck. If I win, it brings me good wishes and positive hopes for the coming year.

Sugerencia: 你的回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“hands on ability”表达不够准确，建议使用“hands-on skills”更符合英语习惯。此外，可以适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I used to spend my birthdays doing puzzles and playing with elaborate toys because I found them very interesting and challenging. In particular, I enjoyed building complex models, which helped me develop my problem-solving skills and hands-on skills.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点和理由，但“memorized”用词不当，应该用“memorable”来形容这一天。建议注意词汇的准确使用，同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday. On that day, I usually reflect on what I have achieved throughout the year and set new goals to make progress in the future. Moreover, celebrating my birthday gives me a chance to spend time with my family and friends, which makes the day even more special and memorable.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“parents birthday”应为“parents' birthdays”，“go to extra mile”应为“go the extra mile”。建议加强语法基础，注意所有格和固定搭配的正确使用，使表达更准确自然。

Ejemplo: For me, I think our parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate. Firstly, our parents go the extra mile to raise us and help us become better people. Therefore, it is essential to show our appreciation and gratitude by celebrating their special day with love and respect. Secondly, as they grow older, it becomes even more important to celebrate their birthdays.

× On my birthday, I usually get it with my close friends to enjoy a delicious dinner because celebrating with them made me feel happier and more connected.

✓ On my birthday, I usually get together with my close friends to enjoy a delicious dinner because celebrating with them makes me feel happier and more connected.

句中“get it with”用法错误，应为“get together with”表示“聚在一起”。此外，前半句用一般现在时“usually”，后半句应保持时态一致，故将“made”改为“makes”。

× On my birthday, I usually get it with my close friends to enjoy a delicious dinner because celebrating with them made me feel happier and more connected.

✓ On my birthday, I usually get together with my close friends to enjoy a delicious dinner because celebrating with them makes me feel happier and more connected.

“get it with”中的“it”多余且用法错误，应去掉，正确表达为“get together with”，表示“与……聚会”。

× If I happen to win, it would bring me good wishes and positive hopes for the coming year.

✓ If I happen to win, it will bring me good wishes and positive hopes for the coming year.

条件句中使用一般现在时“happen”，主句应使用将来时“will”，而非“would”，以保持时态一致。

× I especially enjoyed building complex models which helped me develop my problem solving skills and hands on ability.

✓ I especially enjoyed building complex models which helped me develop my problem-solving skills and hands-on ability.

“problem solving”应为复合形容词，需用连字符连接为“problem-solving”；“hands on”同理，应为“hands-on”，表示“动手能力”。

× Celebrating my birthday also gives me a chance to spend time with my family and friends, which makes the day even more special and memorized.

✓ Celebrating my birthday also gives me a chance to spend time with my family and friends, which makes the day even more special and memorable.

“memorized”是动词过去分词，意为“记住”，此处应使用形容词“memorable”，意为“值得纪念的”。

× For me, I think our parents birthday are the most important to celebrate.

✓ For me, I think our parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate.

“parents”是复数，表示“父母”，其所有格应为“parents'”，且“birthday”应为复数“birthdays”，因为父母有多个生日。

× For me, I think our parents birthday are the most important to celebrate.

✓ For me, I think our parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate.

“parents birthday”缺少所有格标志，应加撇号表示所有关系，正确为“parents' birthdays”。

× Firstly, our parents go to extra mile to raise us and help us become better people.

✓ Firstly, our parents go the extra mile to raise us and help us become better people.

固定短语为“go the extra mile”，表示“付出额外努力”，缺少定冠词“the”。

× Secondly, they grow older and older so we have to celebrate that.

✓ Secondly, they are growing older and older, so we have to celebrate that.

“grow older and older”表示正在进行的状态，使用现在进行时更合适，故改为“are growing older and older”。