Cakes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer wa natural desuga, chotto fukuzatsu na bunshou to imi no kurikaeshi ga arimasu. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I prefer cakes, especially vanilla flavor, because I like its aroma and how it melts in my mouth.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: I prefer cakes, especially vanilla flavor, because I like its sweet aroma and how it melts smoothly in my mouth.

Sugerencia: Kotae ga fumei de, bunpou to imi no shoujiki-sa ga tarinai desu. Motto chokusetsu shite, shoujiki ni kotaete kudasai. Mata, rikai shi yasui you ni setsuzoku-go wo tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: I don't know much about traditional Chinese cakes, but I think they have many kinds. I would like to try them if I visit China someday.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa chokusetsu desuga, bunshou no seikaku-sa to setsuzoku ga tarinai desu. Motto rikai shi yasui you ni, riyuu wo meikaku ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I cannot make cakes because I don't like cooking, so I usually buy them or my mother makes food for me.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: I cannot make cakes because I don't enjoy cooking. Usually, I buy cakes or my mother makes food for me.

Sugerencia: Kotae ga fumei de, imi ga wakarinikui desu. Motto shizen de, chokusetsu kotaete, setsuzoku-go wo tsukatte shousai wo tsukete kudasai.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved cakes as a child. My favorite was a soft and sweet cake with a nice aroma, which I enjoyed very much.

Sugerencia: Kotae wa yoku dekimashita ga, chotto kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na hyougen ga arimasu. Motto shizen de, setsuzoku-go wo tsukatte, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to have desserts after meals. One of my favorites is rice pudding from Nepal, made with milk and rice. I enjoy its creamy texture and rich, sweet flavor.

× Yes, I do prefer cakes over the other sweet foods.

✓ Yes, I prefer cakes over other sweet foods.

The use of 'do' here is unnecessary for expressing preference; 'prefer' is a stative verb and does not typically use the auxiliary 'do' for emphasis in affirmative sentences. Removing 'do' makes the sentence more natural.

× One of the best flavors of the cake that I do like a lot is vanilla.

✓ One of the best cake flavors that I like a lot is vanilla.

The phrase 'flavors of the cake' is awkward; 'cake flavors' is more natural. Also, 'do like' is unnecessary; simple present 'like' suffices.

× I like the aroma in the smell of it and I if even love cake because of its quality to melt on my tongue, which is fairly delicious.

✓ I like the aroma and smell of it, and I even love cake because of its quality to melt on my tongue, which is fairly delicious.

The phrase 'in the smell of it' is redundant; 'aroma and smell' is sufficient. The phrase 'I if even love' is incorrect; it should be 'I even love'. The conjunction 'and' connects the two ideas properly.

× I don't know a lot about Chinese culture so I can find it easy to talk on this.

✓ I don't know a lot about Chinese culture, so I find it hard to talk about this.

The original sentence contradicts itself; 'can find it easy' conflicts with 'don't know a lot'. Also, 'talk on this' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'talk about this'.

× I believe since China has the risks in concern in food I I think they have a lot of traditional science cake over there which I would like to try if I get go to China.

✓ I believe since China has concerns about food safety, I think they have a lot of traditional Chinese cakes over there which I would like to try if I get to go to China.

The phrase 'risks in concern in food' is incorrect; 'concerns about food safety' is appropriate. 'Science cake' is a mishearing or typo for 'Chinese cake'. 'If I get go to China' should be 'if I get to go to China'.

× No, I cannot make cakes.

✓ No, I cannot make cakes.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I usually buy it when I have when I want to have it.

✓ I usually buy it when I want to have it.

The phrase 'when I have when I want to have it' is redundant and confusing. Removing the extra 'when I have' clarifies the sentence.

× It is because I am not fond of cooking any meals I like to bite or my mother used to make food for me.

✓ It is because I am not fond of cooking any meals; I like to bite, or my mother used to make food for me.

The sentence is confusing and lacks proper punctuation. 'I like to bite' is unclear; possibly 'I like to eat' is intended. The sentence should be split or clarified for better understanding.

× Yeah, I absolutely loved cakes when I was signed or one of the favorite cake I have always eaten was the cake having pen and I sent it is because I like its aroma and the sweet texture sweet and soft texture of it give me very.

✓ Yeah, I absolutely loved cakes when I was a child. One of my favorite cakes I have always eaten was the cake with pandan. It is because I like its aroma and the sweet, soft texture of it, which gives me great pleasure.

The original sentence has many errors: 'was signed' is incorrect, likely meant 'was a child'; 'cake having pen and I sent' is unclear, likely 'cake with pandan'; 'give me very' is incomplete. Correcting tense and vocabulary clarifies meaning.

× And I like to have some desserts after I finish my meal.

✓ I like to have some dessert after I finish my meal.

'Desserts' is plural, but usually 'dessert' is uncountable when referring to the course after a meal. Using 'some dessert' is more natural here.

× One of the go to desert is rice pudding, which is one of the common in Nepal.

✓ One of my go-to desserts is rice pudding, which is common in Nepal.

'Go to desert' should be 'go-to dessert' (hyphenated adjective). 'One of the common' is incorrect; 'common' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'one of the'.

× It is made-up of, uh, milk and rice.

✓ It is made of milk and rice.

'Made-up of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'made of' when describing ingredients.

× I like creamy texture and the rich sweet richness and sweetness flavor on it.

✓ I like the creamy texture and the rich, sweet flavor of it.

The phrase 'rich sweet richness and sweetness flavor' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'rich, sweet flavor' is clearer and grammatically correct.