Fishing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to avoid repetition and use correct verb forms. Also, explain your reason more naturally and concisely. For example, say 'I sometimes like eating fish, but it is not my favourite food because it has many small bones, which makes it difficult to eat.'

Ejemplo: I sometimes like eating fish, but it is not my favourite food because it has many small bones, which makes it difficult to eat.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'Honestly, I have never been to the fish market because the smell bothers me. Therefore, I prefer when my mother buys fish at home.'

Ejemplo: Honestly, I have never been to the fish market because the smell bothers me. Therefore, I prefer when my mother buys fish at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect your points. For example, say 'Fishing is not very popular in my hometown, but in some parts of Nepal, it is quite common because many people rely on fish as a main source of food.'

Ejemplo: Fishing is not very popular in my hometown, but in some parts of Nepal, it is quite common because many people rely on fish as a main source of food.

× Sometimes I like to eat fish but not it is not my favorite food because it have small small bones with with is very difficult to swing us.

✓ Sometimes I like to eat fish but it is not my favorite food because it has small small bones which are very difficult to swallow.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (third person singular). Also, 'which are' is needed to correctly connect the clause describing the bones. 'Swing us' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'swallow us', so it is corrected accordingly.

× Sometimes I like to eat fish but not it is not my favorite food because it have small small bones with with is very difficult to swing us.

✓ Sometimes I like to eat fish but it is not my favorite food because it has small small bones which are very difficult to swallow.

The phrase 'with with' is incorrect and redundant; it should be removed. Also, 'which are' is the correct relative pronoun and verb to describe the bones.

× Be honest, I have never gone to the fish market because the smell of fish is not very good.

✓ To be honest, I have never gone to the fish market because the smell of fish is not very good.

The phrase 'Be honest' is an imperative and does not fit here; the correct expression is 'To be honest' to express honesty in a statement.

× They irritate me.

✓ The smell irritates me.

The pronoun 'They' is vague; it should refer clearly to 'The smell' which is singular, so the verb changes accordingly.

× So I don't like to go fish market or so I don't.

✓ So I don't like to go to the fish market, or so I don't.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'the fish market'. It is necessary to use 'go to' when referring to a place.

× My mom bought me bought fish in home.

✓ My mom bought me fish at home.

The word 'bought' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at home' is the correct phrase.

× Uh, actually in my hometown it is not very specially, but in uh, in some places of my country, Nepal, yes, it is very popular because uh, this piece is the main.

✓ Uh, actually in my hometown it is not very special, but in some places of my country, Nepal, yes, it is very popular because fishing is the main activity.

The word 'specially' is an adverb but the adjective 'special' is needed here to describe 'it'. Also, 'this piece is the main' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is corrected to 'fishing is the main activity' for clarity.