Laughing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'I love with my friends'. Also, provide clearer supporting details with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I believe laughter plays a vital role in daily life because it helps reduce stress and boosts happiness. For instance, when I spend time with my friends or family, sharing jokes makes me feel more energetic and joyful, which scientists have also found to improve well-being.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about the event to make your answer clearer and more engaging.

Ejemplo: The last time I laughed was just a few days ago when I went to the cinema with my friends. We watched a comedy movie, and a particularly funny scene made us all laugh, which lifted our spirits and created a joyful atmosphere among us.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and explain how you make others laugh with specific examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe I can make others laugh because I have a good sense of humour. For example, I often tell funny stories or jokes when I am with my friends, which helps lighten the mood and makes everyone smile.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more direct and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about the movie and how it affected you to make your response more natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I usually don't watch many movies, but sometimes I enjoy watching funny films because they completely change my mood and make me feel happier and more energetic. For instance, about a month ago, I watched a popular comedy movie with my family at the cinema, and it was a delightful experience.

× Well, I think laughter is a very important in daily life because it helps people reduce their stress and feel happier.

✓ Well, I think laughter is very important in daily life because it helps people reduce their stress and feel happier.

The word 'important' is an adjective and does not require the article 'a' before it when used in this context. The phrase 'a very important' is incorrect; it should be 'very important' without 'a'.

× For example, when I I love with my friends or family, I feel more excited and energetic and scientist also have found that love.

✓ For example, when I am with my friends or family, I feel more excited and energetic, and scientists have also found that love.

The phrase 'I I love' is incorrect; it should be 'I am with'. Also, 'scientist' should be plural 'scientists' to agree with the verb 'have'. The sentence needed correction in pronoun usage and subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, the last time, uh, I love uh, just uh, uh, one day I go with my friends when we watched a movie in cinema and uh, the funny scene in the movie, uh, make us laugh that made our smooth, energetic and we share happiness feeling with each other.

✓ Uh, the last time, uh, I went, uh, just, uh, one day I went with my friends when we watched a movie in the cinema and, uh, the funny scene in the movie, uh, made us laugh, which made us feel smooth and energetic, and we shared happy feelings with each other.

The verb 'love' is incorrect here; it should be 'went' to indicate past action. 'Go' should be in past tense 'went'. 'Make' should be 'made' to match past tense. 'Share' should be 'shared'. Also, 'happiness feeling' should be 'happy feelings'. The sentence needed consistent past tense usage.

× Yeah, so I am a good to make other people laugh because I am a hilarious person and I also try to pulling others people next.

✓ Yeah, so I am good at making other people laugh because I am a hilarious person and I also try to pull other people next.

The phrase 'a good to make' is incorrect; it should be 'good at making'. 'Try to pulling' is incorrect; it should be 'try to pull'. 'Others people' should be 'other people'. The sentence needed correction in pronoun and verb form usage.

× One would value usually, but sometime I like to watch hilarious movie because it changed my mood completely and made me energetic and feel happier.

✓ I usually value one, but sometimes I like to watch hilarious movies because they change my mood completely and make me energetic and feel happier.

The phrase 'One would value usually' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'I usually value'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Hilarious movie' should be plural 'hilarious movies' to match the context. 'Changed' and 'made' should be present tense 'change' and 'make' to match habitual action.

× Last time I remember it was the matter of one month ago when I watched the famous funny movie with my family in cinema.

✓ The last time I remember was about one month ago when I watched a famous funny movie with my family in the cinema.

The phrase 'Last time I remember it was the matter of one month ago' is awkward; it should be 'The last time I remember was about one month ago'. 'In cinema' should be 'in the cinema'. The sentence needed correction in past tense and article usage.