Laughing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng nên tránh lặp từ "boost" và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý hơn.

Ejemplo: I think laughter plays an important role in daily life because it helps relieve stress and improve our mood. For instance, when I laugh with friends, I feel more relaxed and happy, which positively affects my mental health.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng cụm từ "I remember" không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: The last time I laughed was this afternoon while I was spending time with my mom and family in the garden. We were sharing funny stories, which made me laugh a lot.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn tốt nhưng cần chú ý đến số nhiều của danh từ ("funny story" nên là "funny stories") và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe I can make others laugh because it makes me feel happier and more positive. For example, when someone feels sad or angry, I try to cheer them up by telling jokes or funny stories, which usually brightens their mood.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "it's really improve" nên là "they really improve" và "sad or angry stories" nên là "when I feel sad or angry". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like watching funny movies because they really improve my mood when I feel sad or angry. For instance, after a stressful day, a comedy film helps me relax and feel happier.

× I remember the last time I laughed was this afternoon when I was with my mom and my family around the garden.

✓ I remember the last time I laughed was this afternoon when I was with my mom and my family in the garden.

The preposition 'around' is incorrectly used here; 'in the garden' is the correct phrase to indicate location. This is a preposition usage error, but since the main issue is with the past tense context and sentence structure, it is categorized under Past tense issue.

× I try to cheer them up by telling jokes or funny story, which usually brightens their mood.

✓ I try to cheer them up by telling jokes or funny stories, which usually brightens their mood.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the plural 'jokes' and to correctly express multiple instances. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers because 'or' connects two items that should be parallel in number.

× Yes, I prefer to watch funny movies because it's really improve my mood when I have a sad or angry stories.

✓ Yes, I prefer to watch funny movies because it really improves my mood when I have sad or angry stories.

The phrase 'it's really improve' is incorrect; it should be 'it really improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it' and to use the correct present tense form. Also, 'a sad or angry stories' is incorrect because 'stories' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. The article 'a' is removed and 'stories' remains plural.