Laughing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has some good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I think laughter is an important part of daily life because it helps build connections with others. For example, in a work environment, a simple smile or laugh can boost energy and create a positive atmosphere. This makes people feel more comfortable and improves relationships.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear time reference for the last time you laughed. Try to answer the question directly with a specific example and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I laughed just yesterday when my friends told some funny stories during our gathering. Spending time with them always makes me laugh because they have a great sense of humour.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide supporting details. Use linking words to explain how you make others laugh and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I can make others laugh because I often tell spontaneous jokes. For instance, when I notice someone feeling down, I try to lighten the mood with a funny comment, which usually helps them feel more comfortable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to avoid repeating phrases and finish your thoughts. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why you enjoy funny movies.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching funny movies because they help me relax after a stressful day at work. Since I have a sedentary lifestyle, watching comedies is a great way to calm my mind and lift my spirits.

× I believe that laughter was simple gesture of a smile may boost our relationship with someone.

✓ I believe that laughter is a simple gesture like a smile that may boost our relationship with someone.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'was' (past tense) instead of 'is' (present tense) to describe a general truth. Also, the sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'simple gesture' and needs 'like' to compare laughter to a smile. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I believe that laughter was simple gesture of a smile may boost our relationship with someone.

✓ I believe that laughter is a simple gesture like a smile that may boost our relationship with someone.

The phrase 'simple gesture' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. Omitting articles before singular countable nouns is a common error.

× I believe that laughter was simple gesture of a smile may boost our relationship with someone.

✓ I believe that laughter is a simple gesture like a smile that may boost our relationship with someone.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper connectors. Adding 'like' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× It's help.

✓ It helps.

The phrase 'It's help' is incorrect because 'help' should be in the third person singular present tense form 'helps' to agree with the subject 'It'. Also, 'It's' (it is) should be followed by the verb in correct form.

× When I'm at my friends or family too, they tend to crack jokes.

✓ When I'm with my friends or family too, they tend to crack jokes.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to being in the company of people. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate being together with friends or family.

× I crack instant jokes and make feel comfortable about it.

✓ I crack instant jokes and make others feel comfortable about it.

The sentence lacks the object pronoun 'others' after 'make' to indicate who is being made comfortable. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× Instead of.

✓ (Sentence incomplete; unable to correct without additional context.)

The phrase 'Instead of.' is a sentence fragment and incomplete. It needs to be connected to a complete thought to be grammatically correct.

× Due to pressurized work and sedentary lifestyle, I would love to watch something which relaxes myself and calms my mind.

✓ Due to pressurized work and a sedentary lifestyle, I would love to watch something which relaxes me and calms my mind.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. The correct object pronoun is 'me' because the subject and object are different; 'myself' is used for emphasis or when the subject and object are the same.

× Due to pressurized work and sedentary lifestyle, I would love to watch something which relaxes myself and calms my mind.

✓ Due to pressurized work and a sedentary lifestyle, I would love to watch something which relaxes me and calms my mind.

The phrase 'sedentary lifestyle' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it because it is a singular countable noun.

× So I'd prefer watching a.

✓ So I'd prefer watching a funny movie.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'a'. It needs the object 'funny movie' to complete the thought and be grammatically correct.