Perfume— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่ซับซ้อนเกินไป ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล เช่น การใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลและตัวอย่างอย่างชัดเจน

Ejemplo: No, I don't really like perfume because strong scents can be overwhelming. However, some people feel that perfume makes them more confident and active. I prefer to stay natural and avoid wearing strong fragrances.

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมทั้งใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจน เช่น การบอกโอกาสที่ใช้และเหตุผลในการใช้

Ejemplo: Not really. I only use perfume on special occasions, such as when I meet relatives or friends who live far away. I also use it when I feel that I need to freshen up my smell.

Sugerencia: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง พร้อมทั้งอธิบายเหตุผลและวิธีการตัดสินใจอย่างชัดเจน

Ejemplo: I don't usually buy perfume as a gift because it's hard to choose a scent that suits the person. However, if I have to, I will ask my friends or parents for advice before deciding.

Sugerencia: คำตอบควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล พร้อมทั้งให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับราคาและคุณภาพของน้ำหอมในอดีตและปัจจุบัน

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I thought perfumes were very expensive because only well-known brands were available. But nowadays, there are many affordable perfumes with good quality.

× No, I don't really like perfume because I think strong sense can be overwhelming, although some people feel that prefer make them feel more confident and active.

✓ No, I don't really like perfume because I think a strong scent can be overwhelming, although some people feel that it makes them feel more confident and active.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'sense' instead of 'scent' and omits the pronoun 'it' before 'makes'. The phrase 'feel that prefer make' is ungrammatical; it should be 'feel that it makes'. Correct pronoun usage is essential for clarity.

× I prefer to avoid sin I father smelled too intense.

✓ I prefer to avoid scents that smell too intense.

The phrase 'sin I father smelled' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'scents that smell'. The preposition 'that' introduces the relative clause properly.

× For example, are usually should stay natural without any funka.

✓ For example, I usually prefer to stay natural without any fragrance.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, making it ungrammatical. 'Are usually should stay' is incorrect. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject 'I' and verb 'prefer to stay'. 'Funka' is likely a misspelling of 'fragrance'.

× Not really. I sometimes and you did when I have for specials occur like I have to make my relativ or my friends who live long away and sometimes miles away uses when I feel that my selves have a smell.

✓ Not really. I sometimes use it when I have special occasions, like when I have to meet my relatives or my friends who live far away, and sometimes when I feel that I have a smell.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun errors and unclear phrases such as 'you did', 'for specials occur', 'relativ', 'my selves'. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and clearer expressions.

× I use it too.

✓ I use it too.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

× I think I want because I think it's hard to fight are sent that suit to the person who gonna give to but if I have to. Buy it.

✓ I think I won't because I think it's hard to find a scent that suits the person who I'm going to give it to, but if I have to buy it, I will.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has unclear phrases like 'want' instead of 'won't', 'fight are sent' instead of 'find a scent', and 'gonna give to'. The correction clarifies modal verb usage and sentence structure.

× I will ask my friends or my parents too. Have we decided with me?

✓ I will ask my friends or my parents too. Have they decided with me?

The phrase 'Have we decided with me?' is incorrect. It should be 'Have they decided with me?' or better 'Have they decided for me?'. The pronoun 'we' is inappropriate here.

× When I was a kid, I think perfume cost a lot of money.

✓ When I was a kid, I thought perfume cost a lot of money.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. 'I think' should be in past tense 'I thought' to match 'When I was a kid'.

× Because. In DuPage is. Only the well known band Hills have her perform products, but in this day we have.

✓ Because in the past, only well-known brands had perfume products, but nowadays we have many options.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and contains unclear phrases like 'In DuPage is' and 'band Hills have her perform products'. The correction provides a coherent sentence.

× The perform this doesn't cause that much and have a good quality too.

✓ These perfumes don't cost that much and have good quality too.

The original sentence has unclear words 'perform this' and 'cause' instead of 'cost'. The correction uses the correct words and proper sentence structure.