Perfume— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear due to incorrect word usage and grammar mistakes. Try to use correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like perfumes very much because they make me feel fresh and confident. Whenever I wear perfume, it boosts my mood and helps me stay positive throughout the day. That's why I prefer to use perfume daily.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains unclear words and grammatical errors which affect clarity. Use correct vocabulary and link your ideas logically. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I use perfume every day. Firstly, it gives me a positive feeling and boosts my confidence because of its pleasant fragrance. Moreover, I usually apply it in the morning before leaving home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains unclear phrases. Make sure to answer directly and provide specific reasons or examples. Use proper sentence structure and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift because it is a symbol of love and affection. Many people appreciate receiving perfumes as presents since they are thoughtful and personal.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and some unclear expressions. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Use correct vocabulary and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think perfumes can be expensive nowadays. However, the prices vary depending on the brand and quality. Generally, perfumes with unique fragrances tend to cost more.

× I like perfumes because it gives me very good pregnant and whenever I do any kind of activity so it gives me positive iti so that's why I prefer to use perfume daily.

✓ I like perfumes because they give me a very good fragrance and whenever I do any kind of activity, they give me positive energy, so that's why I prefer to use perfume daily.

The word 'perfumes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb should also be plural ('they give'). 'Pregnant' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'fragrance'. 'Iti' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; 'energy' fits the context. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× Of course, I prefer to use version in my daily life.

✓ Of course, I prefer to use perfume in my daily life.

The word 'version' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'perfume'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for meaning.

× First of all, it gives me a positive ITI as well as I feel very confident at that time because of the fragnance and I think that I mainly use in my daily life an hour.

✓ First of all, it gives me positive energy and I feel very confident at that time because of the fragrance, and I think that I mainly use it daily for an hour.

'ITI' is likely a typo for 'energy'. 'Fragnance' should be 'fragrance'. The phrase 'I mainly use in my daily life an hour' is incorrect; it should be 'I mainly use it daily for an hour'. Also, 'it' refers to perfume, so it should be included.

× Yes, I will get over films as a gift because this is a symbol of love and affection which gives a good.

✓ Yes, I will get perfumes as a gift because they are a symbol of love and affection which gives good feelings.

'Over films' is incorrect; it should be 'perfumes'. 'This is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'perfumes'. The sentence is incomplete; 'which gives a good' is unclear and needs completion, e.g., 'which gives good feelings'.

× Well, this in modern era all things are very expensive if I talk about perfume.

✓ Well, in the modern era, all things are very expensive if I talk about perfume.

'This in modern era' is incorrect; it should be 'in the modern era'. Also, 'perfume' is singular here, which is acceptable if referring to perfume in general.

× So yes, these are also very expensive but the price offer different perfumes are different from another one.

✓ So yes, these are also very expensive, but the prices of different perfumes are different from one another.

'Price offer different perfumes are different from another one' is incorrect. It should be 'the prices of different perfumes are different from one another' to correctly express comparison among multiple items.

× But yes, during these days all perfumes are very expensive and because of their fragments.

✓ But yes, these days all perfumes are very expensive because of their fragrances.

'During these days' is better as 'these days'. 'Fragments' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fragrances' when referring to scents.